Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I think it depend if I need to write apologize letter to my close friend, I think it is necessary for me to write on hand.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Yeah, I always tap on laptop because I think laptop laptops are portable and easy to carry. I can do my job whether I'm traveling or sitting in a cafe.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
Maybe when I was in primary school we had computer lessons and my teacher gave us a task to practice our typing ability.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
While I practice my typing by taking online typing courses and correct my finger position. By doing this, I can spend 20 minutes to finish a long and difficult tasks.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答要更直接并注意语法与词汇准确性。首先提供一个主题句表明偏好,然后用一两句具体原因或例子支持。注意时态和主谓一致("it depends"),以及常用表达("handwrite"或"write by hand")。避免冗长或重复。
Ejemplo: I usually prefer typing for most tasks because it’s faster and more convenient. However, when I want to show sincerity—such as writing an apology to a close friend—I handwrite the letter because it feels more personal and thoughtful.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Puntuación: 75.0Sugerencia: 回答清晰但有重复和用词不当("tap on laptop","laptop laptops")。应先给出直接回答(desktop or laptop),然后用一两句具体原因支持并使用连接词使表述更流畅。注意动词选择("use"或"type on")和避免重复。
Ejemplo: I type on a laptop every day because it’s portable and convenient. For example, I can work while traveling or sit in a café and finish tasks without being tied to one place.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Puntuación: 80.0Sugerencia: 结构基本正确,但可更自然简洁。先直接回答时间,然后用一句具体细节支持,并用连接词使句子更流畅。避免模糊词("maybe")以显得更自信。
Ejemplo: I learned to type when I was in primary school. We had computer lessons where the teacher gave us typing exercises to improve our speed and accuracy.
How do you improve your typing?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答需要语法修正和更具体的细节。使用完整句子(避免从句单独成句),并说明具体方法和结果。修正语法问题("correct my finger position" → "correct my finger positioning";"finish a long and difficult tasks" → "finish long or difficult tasks")。提供量化改进更可信。
Ejemplo: I improve my typing by taking online courses and practicing proper finger positioning every day. As a result, my speed has increased and I can now complete long or difficult typing tasks in about 20 minutes.
× I think it depend if I need to write apologize letter to my close friend, I think it is necessary for me to write on hand.
✓ I think it depends. If I need to write an apology letter to my close friend, I think it is necessary for me to write it by hand.
问题类型:现在时/主谓一致和句子结构与冠词错误。解释:原句中“depend”应与主语“I”配合使用第三人称单数形式时加 -s,正确为“depends”;原句其实包含两个独立句,应分为两句或用连词连接;“apologize letter”用词和词形错误,正确名词为“apology letter”;缺少不定冠词“an”;“write on hand”是错误搭配,正确表达为“write by hand”;同时需要在“write it by hand”加上宾语“it”。建议:注意主谓一致,使用正确名词形式和冠词,并使用习惯搭配“by hand”来表示手写。
× Yeah, I always tap on laptop because I think laptop laptops are portable and easy to carry. I can do my job whether I'm traveling or sitting in a cafe.
✓ Yeah, I always type on my laptop because I think laptops are portable and easy to carry. I can do my job whether I'm traveling or sitting in a café.
问题类型:形容词/副词及词汇使用错误和重复。解释:原句用“tap on laptop”不自然,表示打字应使用“type on”或“use the keyboard”;应加所有格“my laptop”表示自己的设备;句中出现“laptop laptops”重复,应改为复数“laptops”或单数“my laptop”;“cafe”可拼作“café”。建议:使用习惯搭配“type on my laptop/keyboard”,避免词语重复,注意所有格和复数的正确使用。
× Maybe when I was in primary school we had computer lessons and my teacher gave us a task to practice our typing ability.
✓ Maybe when I was in primary school we had computer lessons and my teacher gave us a task to practice our typing skills.
问题类型:过去时和词汇选择。解释:句子时态本身使用过去时正确(was, had, gave),但“typing ability”用词不太地道,常说“typing skills”或“typing ability”亦可但“skills”更自然。建议:保留过去时态,用更常见的搭配“typing skills”。
× While I practice my typing by taking online typing courses and correct my finger position.
✓ I practice my typing by taking online typing courses and correcting my finger position.
问题类型:动词+ -ing形式。解释:原句中“While I practice... and correct...”结构不一致。并且以“While”开头后面应接完整句子或改为并列结构。并列动词需保持形式一致,正确为“taking... and correcting...”。建议:保持并列动词形式一致,或去掉“While”改为完整句子。
× By doing this, I can spend 20 minutes to finish a long and difficult tasks.
✓ By doing this, I can spend 20 minutes finishing a long and difficult task.
问题类型:单复数问题与动词形式。解释:原句“a long and difficult tasks”混用了不定冠词“a”与复数“tasks”,应统一为单数“a ... task”或去掉“a”改为“long and difficult tasks”。此外更自然的表达是“spend 20 minutes finishing...”而不是“spend 20 minutes to finish...”。建议:注意冠词与名词单复数一致,并使用固定结构“spend time doing something”。