Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), correct grammar ('more expressive' is fine but remove 'person more'). Add a brief reason and an example using a linking word.

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting because it's more expressive and personal. For example, when I write by hand I can use different styles and little drawings to convey emotion, which typing doesn't allow.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence, correct grammar (I’m a data scientist), and avoid vague fillers ('like'). Use a linking phrase to add detail about which you use more or why.

Ejemplo: Yes, I type every day because I'm a data scientist. I mainly use a desktop at work for heavier tasks, but I also use a laptop when I'm traveling or working from home.

Sugerencia: Start with a concise answer (At 12), remove repeated phrases ('like'), and use linking words to explain continuity. Provide a precise time-span and one supporting detail.

Ejemplo: I learned to type at about 12 years old during computer classes at school. Since then I have practiced regularly, so I've been typing for more than ten years.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and grammatically. Avoid starting with 'Because' alone. Use linking words (for example, so, and) and give specific methods and sites or routines to sound more credible.

Ejemplo: I improve my typing by practicing every day and using online typing tutors. For example, I use websites like TypingClub and 10FastFingers to do timed exercises and track my speed improvements.

× Uh, I prefer handwriting because it's more expressive person more.

✓ Uh, I prefer handwriting because it's more expressive.

The original sentence incorrectly includes 'person more' which is ungrammatical and redundant. Remove the extraneous words. 'More expressive' correctly modifies 'handwriting'. Suggestion: keep modifiers directly after the noun or use a comparative structure correctly (e.g., 'more expressive than typing').

× Yeah, because I'm data scientist so I have to work and type on desktop and laptop like every day.

✓ Yeah, because I'm a data scientist, I have to work and type on a desktop and a laptop almost every day.

Missing article 'a' before 'data scientist' and missing articles before 'desktop' and 'laptop'. 'Like every day' is informal; replace with 'almost every day' or 'almost daily'. Also use a comma to separate clauses. Suggestion: include necessary articles and avoid filler words like 'like'.

× At school when I was like 12 years old, I had a computer sessions and it continued from 12 years old till now.

✓ At school, when I was about 12 years old, I had computer sessions, and they have continued from then until now.

'Had a computer sessions' mixes singular article with plural noun and uses past simple while the action continues to present; use plural 'sessions' without 'a' and present perfect 'have continued' to indicate continuation. Replace 'like' with 'about' for formality. Suggestion: use correct articles with countable nouns and present perfect for actions that continue.

× Like it's been like more than 10 years with typing on keyboard.

✓ It's been more than 10 years since I started typing on a keyboard.

Use 'It's been' with 'since' and a clear starting point. 'With typing on keyboard' is awkward; use 'since I started typing on a keyboard'. Include article 'a' before 'keyboard'. Remove filler 'like'. Suggestion: restructure to 'It's been X years since...'.

× Because I use the keyboard daily so this improve my typing and I use sometimes like random websites for increase the. The typing speed.

✓ I use the keyboard daily, so this improves my typing, and I sometimes use random websites to increase my typing speed.

The original contains sentence fragments, incorrect word order, missing third-person singular 'improves', misplaced adverbs, and an incomplete phrase 'for increase the. The typing speed'. Remove 'Because' if starting a main clause, or combine correctly with 'so'. Use third-person singular verb 'improves' to agree with subject 'this'. Place adverb 'sometimes' before the verb. Use infinitive 'to increase' and remove the stray period. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement, proper adverb placement, and complete infinitive forms.