Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I prefer handwriting because I'm not very good at typing and writing notes by hand help me remember information better. It also improves my handwriting and help me concentrate when I studying.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Well, no, I don't type every day, I tend to write things by hand, but I will use my laptop to type if I need to complete forms or prepare PPT.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
I learned to type when I was in junior high school because my school offered computer classes. In those lessons, we practiced typing and learned basic computer skills, which helped me become like a little confidence using a keyboard.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
Well I usually umm use the app to help me improve my skills, like I will download a typing app and to practice like 30 minutes each day and I think it can help me better.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Puntuación: 72.0Sugerencia: 用更自然和语法正确的句子表达观点,注意主谓一致和时态。可以把回答控制在2-4句内,先给出直接答案,再用一到两句具体原因支持,并使用连接词使句子更连贯。例如把 “help me remember” 改为 “helps me remember”,把 “help me concentrate when I studying” 改为 “helps me concentrate when I study”。
Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting because I'm not very good at typing. Handwriting helps me remember information better and improves my penmanship, so I find it easier to concentrate when I study.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Puntuación: 78.0Sugerencia: 回答简洁明了,但注意句子结构和用词自然。将长句拆成两句,用连词连接并补充小细节(如频率或常见场合)。避免缩写或口语填充词(如“well”)过多。
Ejemplo: No, I don't type every day. I usually write things by hand, but I use my laptop to type when I need to fill out forms or prepare PowerPoint presentations.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Puntuación: 68.0Sugerencia: 注意语法和用词自然性,避免不必要的口语表达(如“like a little confidence”)。先给出时间点,然后具体说明学到的内容和影响,使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ejemplo: I learned to type in junior high school because my school offered computer classes. In those lessons we practiced typing and learned basic computer skills, which gave me confidence using a keyboard.
How do you improve your typing?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 减少口头语和犹豫词,句子更简洁并注意动词形式。给出具体方法和频率,并用连接词解释效果。可以说明你用哪些练习(速度、准确率)来提升。
Ejemplo: I usually use a typing app to improve my skills. I practice for about 30 minutes every day, focusing on accuracy and speed, and I've noticed my typing has become faster and more reliable.
× I prefer handwriting because I'm not very good at typing and writing notes by hand help me remember information better.
✓ I prefer handwriting because I'm not very good at typing, and writing notes by hand helps me remember information better.
句子中主语是复合句的第三人称单数(写笔记这个动作作为习惯性行为可以看作单一主语“writing notes”),谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“helps”。建议在“typing”和“and”之间加逗号以明确并列关系,并把“help”改为“helps”。
× It also improves my handwriting and help me concentrate when I studying.
✓ It also improves my handwriting and helps me concentrate when I am studying.
这是主谓一致和时态问题:并列的第二个谓语应与第一部分主语一致,使用第三人称单数“helps”;另外“when I studying”缺少助动词,正确结构为“when I am studying”。建议把“help”改为“helps”,并在“studying”前加“am”。
× Well, no, I don't type every day, I tend to write things by hand, but I will use my laptop to type if I need to complete forms or prepare PPT.
✓ Well, no, I don't type every day; I tend to write things by hand, but I use my laptop to type if I need to complete forms or prepare PPTs.
这里时态和习惯用法不一致:一般情况描述用一般现在时更自然,所以“will use”应改为一般现在时“use”。另外“PPT”作为可数名词应使用复数或加冠词,改为“PPTs”。建议用分号或句号分开长句以增强可读性。
× I learned to type when I was in junior high school because my school offered computer classes.
✓ I learned to type when I was in junior high school because my school offered computer classes.
该句本身时态使用正确(过去时描述过去发生的事情),不需要修改。保留原句即可。
× In those lessons, we practiced typing and learned basic computer skills, which helped me become like a little confidence using a keyboard.
✓ In those lessons, we practiced typing and learned basic computer skills, which helped me become a little more confident using a keyboard.
原句中“become like a little confidence”结构不正确:应使用形容词短语“become a little more confident”来修饰主语。把“like a little confidence”改为“a little more confident”。
× Well I usually umm use the app to help me improve my skills, like I will download a typing app and to practice like 30 minutes each day and I think it can help me better.
✓ Well, I usually use an app to help me improve my skills. For example, I download a typing app and practice for about 30 minutes each day, and I think it helps me improve.
原句存在多处问题:1) 冗余的“umm”可删;2) 冠词使用不当,应为“use an app”;3) “I will download... and to practice”中不定式结构混乱,应统一为一般现在时描述习惯性动作(download, practice);4) “to practice like 30 minutes”应为“practice for about 30 minutes”;5) 结尾“help me better”不自然,改为“helps me improve”。建议使用更简洁的句子并统一时态为一般现在时来表达习惯。