Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct verb forms and articles.

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting to typing. Mainly, writing by hand helps me focus better and often sparks new ideas, because the physical act of writing slows my thinking and lets me reflect. For example, when I take notes in lectures, I remember concepts more clearly.

Sugerencia: Use clearer vocabulary and correct nouns, and use linking words to organise ideas. Give one clear reason, then a specific example. Avoid unclear or incorrect word choices (e.g., ‘thigh chart’, ‘desk’ vs ‘desktop’).

Ejemplo: I usually type on a desktop, especially during clinic hours, because it runs specialized software for analyzing patients’ facial symmetry and photos. For instance, I store and edit patient records and images on the desktop since it is faster and more secure than my phone.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear time reference, then add a concise sequence of events using linking words (first, then, later). Fix grammar (e.g., 'gifted a computer', 'graduation', 'downloaded a typing app').

Ejemplo: I learned to type when I was at university after my father gave me a personal computer as a graduation gift. At first I taught myself to type for presentations, and later I downloaded a typing tutor app to improve speed and accuracy.

Sugerencia: Structure the answer: state your main methods, then give specific examples and results. Use correct phrases ('shortcuts', 'typing tutor app', 'learned by myself') and linking words (first, then, finally).

Ejemplo: I improved my typing through three main steps. First, I practised on my own by copying text to get familiar with the keyboard. Then I used a typing tutor app to learn proper finger placement and timing. Finally, my son showed me keyboard shortcuts, which increased my speed and efficiency.

× I prefer handwriting to typing because I'm trained in this way to write with a pen on paper.

✓ I prefer handwriting to typing because I was trained to write with a pen on paper.

The original uses 'I'm trained in this way' which is an awkward passive and mismatches tense. Use simple past passive 'was trained' to indicate a past training event and remove 'in this way' which is unnecessary. Suggestion: use 'was trained to write' for clarity.

× It's not only helps me to focus more but also stimulate my mind to regenerate more idea typing.

✓ Not only does it help me focus more, but it also stimulates my mind to generate more ideas when typing.

The sentence has auxiliary inversion errors and mixed verbs. 'Not only' requires inversion ('does it help') and verbs must agree with subject: 'stimulates'. 'Regenerate more idea typing' is ungrammatical; use 'generate more ideas when typing'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct noun pluralization ('ideas').

× I just started from my graduation so I don't have that relationship with typing while I'm thinking and.

✓ I only started using typing after graduation, so I don't have much experience typing while I am thinking aloud.

The original has awkward structure 'started from my graduation' and an incomplete ending 'and.' Rewrite to 'started using typing after graduation' and clarify 'don't have that relationship with typing' as 'don't have much experience typing while I am thinking.' Ensure complete sentence with appropriate tense.

× I always type on desktop especially during my clinic hours because it has all the facilities like software and many different kind of tools to analyze my patient for their facial symmetry as well as poster correction.

✓ I always type on a desktop, especially during my clinic hours, because it has all the software and many different kinds of tools to analyze my patients' facial symmetry as well as postural correction.

Missing articles and incorrect third-person singular/plural forms: 'desktop' needs an article 'a desktop'. 'many different kind of tools' should be 'many different kinds of tools'. 'my patient' should be plural possessive 'my patients' because tools analyze multiple patients; also 'poster correction' likely intended 'postural correction'. Ensure plural forms and correct noun phrases.

× Moreover, I always make my thigh chart on my desktop because I can keep my data safely in this desk.

✓ Moreover, I always make my thigh charts on my desktop because I can keep my data safely on this computer.

Preposition and noun choice errors: 'make my thigh chart on my desktop' is okay but 'thigh chart' may be plural; 'in this desk' is incorrect for storing digital data—use 'on this computer' or 'on this desktop'. Use 'on' for digital storage and correct noun.

× I was gifted my personal computer during my graduation days by my father.

✓ My father gifted me a personal computer during my university days.

Passive 'was gifted my personal computer ... by my father' is grammatical but less natural. Use active past 'My father gifted me' and 'graduation days' is awkward; use 'university days' or 'while I was at university'. Maintain past tense.

× That was the first time when I needed a computer to do my own presentation and I started typing by all by myself and later I realized I should have some formal training on it and I downloaded and typing teaching app that.

✓ That was the first time I needed a computer to do my own presentations, and I started typing by myself. Later I realized I should get some formal training, so I downloaded a typing tutor app.

Multiple article and structure errors: 'the first time when' -> 'the first time I'; 'presentation' plural 'presentations'; redundant 'all by myself' -> 'by myself'; awkward 'should have some formal training on it' -> 'should get some formal training'; 'typing teaching app' -> 'typing tutor app'. Fix sentence run-on by splitting and use correct articles.

× Earlier I started learning typing all by myself by copying or just pressing the button I can see.

✓ At first I started learning to type by myself by copying or just pressing the keys I could see.

Use 'learning to type' rather than 'learning typing'. 'Pressing the button I can see' should be 'pressing the keys I could see' with past perspective 'could'. Use correct noun 'keys' for keyboard.

× But later on I realized I should have a proper training and should know the rule and regulation.

✓ But later I realized I should have proper training and should know the rules and regulations.

'article and count noun errors: 'a proper training' is unidiomatic; use 'proper training' without 'a'. 'rule and regulation' should be plural 'rules and regulations'.

× So I downloaded typing tutor app.

✓ So I downloaded a typing tutor app.

Missing article 'a' before 'typing tutor app'. Also more natural to include 'a'.

× Later on my son also taught me lots of shortcuts.

✓ Later, my son also taught me many shortcuts.

Original is mostly correct; adjust 'lots of' to 'many' for formality and remove 'on' after 'later'. This is a minor stylistic improvement rather than strict grammar fix.