Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I prefer typing because I think typing are more quickly and it can save me more time. However, handwriting often cost me a lot of time and I need to prepare paper and pencil, but typing I can just on my phone.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Yes, I type on desktop every day. Umm because I need to prepare my IELTS task on my computer, so I type on desktop every day.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
I think I learned it when I was in my primary school in my 12 years old. I first had my phone and I always type on the WeChat to communicate with my friends.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
I think just typing more frequency UMM. For example, I often type on my phone to communicate with my friends and I think it makes me more familiar to the UMM keyboard.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Puntuación: 62.0Sugerencia: 语法与单复数、时态和用词搭配需改进。回答应更简洁自然,控制在最多5句,首句直接回应问题,随后用一两句给出具体原因和例子,注意使用连接词使逻辑更连贯。可改正的点包括:'typing are'→'typing is','more quickly'→'quicker'或'more quickly'用法要配合句子结构,'handwriting often cost me'→'handwriting often costs me',以及避免重复和口语填充词。
Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is quicker and more convenient. For example, I can type notes on my phone anytime, while handwriting requires paper and a pen. Therefore, I usually choose typing to save time.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Puntuación: 68.0Sugerencia: 回答应更自然并避免重复和口语填充词(如 'umm')。首句直接回答,接着简短说明原因并给出具体细节。注意冠词使用:'on desktop'→'on a desktop'或'name the device: on my desktop computer'。控制在最多三到四句以内。
Ejemplo: Yes, I use a desktop computer every day. I prepare my IELTS practice and assignments on it, so I prefer the larger screen and physical keyboard for typing. It helps me work more efficiently.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 时态、年龄表达和习惯用法错误较多。应直接给出时间点或年龄,使用正确结构(例如 'when I was 12' 或 'when I was in primary school',但二者可能冲突)。如果要说明先后关系,用连接词并提供具体例子。避免模糊表达如 'I think'。
Ejemplo: I learned to type when I was about 12 years old, during primary school. At that time I started using a phone and practised by messaging friends on WeChat, which helped me improve my speed.
How do you improve your typing?
Puntuación: 58.0Sugerencia: 回答缺乏具体方法且有语法错误。应给出具体、有条理的改进方法(例如练习打字软件、定期练习、注意手指位置),并使用连贯连接词。修正表达:'typing more frequency'→'typing more frequently','familiar to the keyboard'→'familiar with the keyboard'。避免口头语。
Ejemplo: I improve my typing mainly by practising regularly. For example, I use typing apps and text my friends frequently on my phone to build speed, and I also try online typing exercises to improve accuracy.
× I prefer typing because I think typing are more quickly and it can save me more time.
✓ I prefer typing because I think typing is quicker and it can save me more time.
句子中主语是单数名词短语“typing”,谓语“are”应与之保持一致,正确为“is”。另外“quickly”是副词,但此处需用形容词“quicker”来修饰名词“typing”。建议:主语是名词或动名词时用单数/复数对应的动词形式;用形容词修饰名词,用副词修饰动词。
× However, handwriting often cost me a lot of time and I need to prepare paper and pencil, but typing I can just on my phone.
✓ However, handwriting often costs me a lot of time and I need to prepare paper and a pencil, but with typing I can just use my phone.
“cost”与主语“handwriting”不一致,应为“costs”(主谓一致)。“prepare paper and pencil”缺少冠词,英语中单数可数名词前需加不定冠词“a”。短语“typing I can just on my phone”缺少介词和动词,意为“通过打字在手机上”,应改为“with typing I can just use my phone”或“I can just type on my phone”。建议:注意主谓一致、冠词使用以及正确搭配介词和动词。
× Yes, I type on desktop every day. Umm because I need to prepare my IELTS task on my computer, so I type on desktop every day.
✓ Yes, I type on a desktop every day. Umm, because I need to prepare my IELTS tasks on my computer, I type on a desktop every day.
“desktop”作为可数名词单指一台台式电脑时应加不定冠词“a desktop”。“task”在此处应为复数“tasks”或改为“task paperwork”等以匹配语境。句子连接处用逗号更自然,并避免重复。建议:可数名词单数前加冠词;检查单复数一致;注意句子连贯。
× I think I learned it when I was in my primary school in my 12 years old.
✓ I think I learned it when I was in primary school at the age of 12.
“in my primary school”应为“in primary school”或“at primary school”。“in my 12 years old”是错误表达,正确说法为“at the age of 12”。建议:关于年龄使用“at the age of X”或“I was X years old”。去掉多余的“my”。
× I first had my phone and I always type on the WeChat to communicate with my friends.
✓ I first got my phone and I always type on WeChat to communicate with my friends.
“had my phone”常用更自然的“got my phone”。“the WeChat”中的定冠词“the”不需要,应用“WeChat”。建议:应用常见搭配(get a phone, use WeChat),去掉不必要的冠词。
× I think just typing more frequency UMM.
✓ I think just typing more frequently, umm.
“frequency”是名词,但这里需用副词“frequently”来修饰动词“typing”。另外在口语中“umm”可保留但标点应恰当。建议:动词后用副词形式来表示频率或方式。
× For example, I often type on my phone to communicate with my friends and I think it makes me more familiar to the UMM keyboard.
✓ For example, I often type on my phone to communicate with my friends and I think it makes me more familiar with the keyboard.
短语“familiar to”通常应为“familiar with”。“the UMM keyboard”中“UMM”疑为语气填充词,若指“my phone’s keyboard”应改为“the keyboard”或“my phone's keyboard”。建议:使用固定搭配“familiar with”,并明确要指的名词短语,去掉不必要或错误的单词。