Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
It depends. So, uh, when I was in secondary school, I, I prefer handwriting because at the most of my job, my academics, uh, assessments are present in writing. But now I prefer typing because I am an adult, I am working. So I used to need to, uh, make PPT or some.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Yes, too prepared for iOS. I recent I recently I have uh make some make some practice in the monkey type to improve my fluency in typing and my fasten my speed.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
Umm, in Hong Kong, uh, people started to learn how to type on a keyboard since as a primary school, but I didn't really, uh, and I didn't really get the skills when I am young, but now I try to pick up the skills.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
Recently I am uh trying to practice with online typing tests, ensure daily exercise uh in the website called Monkey type to improve my skills and also to fasten my speed.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Puntuación: 62.0Sugerencia: 回答要更直接并且条理清晰。可以先给出明确的主题句(我更喜欢……),然后用一到两个具体原因支持,并用连接词衔接。注意避免重复和语气词(uh, um)。时态要一致,过去时描述过去情况,现在时描述现在的偏好。
Ejemplo: I used to prefer handwriting when I was in secondary school because most of my assignments were written by hand. However, now I prefer typing because I work professionally and need to prepare presentations and digital documents, which is faster and more convenient.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答要先明确是哪种设备(desktop或laptop),然后说明频率和具体做法。避免不连贯和重复,使用简单清晰的句子并用连接词说明原因或细节。注意语法(例如‘I recently practiced on...’)。
Ejemplo: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I rarely use a desktop. Recently I have been practicing on a website called Monkeytype to improve my typing fluency and increase my speed.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答要用清晰的时间点或阶段来说明(e.g. at primary school / later),并说明个人经历的差异。避免含糊和重复,时态要正确(过去学/后来学)。可用连接词如 'although' 或 'however' 表示对比。
Ejemplo: In Hong Kong many children start learning typing at primary school, but I didn't really learn it well when I was young. However, as an adult I am now trying to pick up the skill and practice regularly.
How do you improve your typing?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答要结构化:先说你如何练习(方法),然后说明频率和目的。使用正确的表达(e.g. 'I practice daily on a website called Monkeytype to improve my speed and accuracy')。避免语音填充词并保持不超过五句。
Ejemplo: I improve my typing by practicing daily on an online site called Monkeytype. I do short timed tests to work on both speed and accuracy, and I track my progress so I can focus on my weakest keys.
× It depends. So, uh, when I was in secondary school, I, I prefer handwriting because at the most of my job, my academics, uh, assessments are present in writing. But now I prefer typing because I am an adult, I am working. So I used to need to, uh, make PPT or some.
✓ It depends. When I was in secondary school, I preferred handwriting because most of my schoolwork and assessments were in writing. But now I prefer typing because I'm an adult and I work, so I need to make PPTs and similar documents.
错误类型:现在/过去时使用不当。原句中混用了过去和现在时(如“when I was... I prefer”),在描述过去的习惯应使用过去时(preferred);另外“at the most of my job, my academics” 表达不自然且时态/名词搭配错误,应改为“most of my schoolwork and assessments were in writing”。建议:根据时间背景统一时态,描述过去的情况用过去时,描述现在的情况用现在时。
× at the most of my job, my academics, uh, assessments are present in writing.
✓ most of my schoolwork and assessments were in writing.
错误类型:量词或限定词使用不当。原句“at the most of”不是正确短语,应使用“most of”来表示“……的大部分”;此外“my job, my academics”混乱,需用更合适的名词如“schoolwork”。建议:使用固定搭配“most of + 名词短语”,并选择与语境匹配的名词。
× So I used to need to, uh, make PPT or some.
✓ so I need to make PPTs and similar documents.
错误类型:情态动词/习惯表达使用不当。原句“used to need to”用法混乱;“used to”用于表示过去的习惯,而此处要表达现在工作中需要,应用现在时“need to”。建议:不要将“used to”与表示现在需求的动词同用;用复数PPTs或更明确表达。
× Yes, too prepared for iOS. I recent I recently I have uh make some make some practice in the monkey type to improve my fluency in typing and my fasten my speed.
✓ Yes, I'm preparing for iOS. Recently I have been doing some practice on Monkeytype to improve my typing fluency and speed.
错误类型:第三人称单数/时态及动词形式错误。原句时态混乱(“I recent I recently I have uh make”),动词“make practice”应该用“do practice”或“practise”,“fasten my speed”错误,应为“increase/improve my speed”。建议:使用现在完成进行时或现在完成时表达近期持续的练习;使用正确搭配“practice on Monkeytype”,“improve my speed”。
× Umm, in Hong Kong, uh, people started to learn how to type on a keyboard since as a primary school, but I didn't really, uh, and I didn't really get the skills when I am young, but now I try to pick up the skills.
✓ In Hong Kong, people start to learn typing in primary school, but I didn't really learn the skills when I was young. Now I'm trying to pick them up.
错误类型:过去时与现在时混用及时态不一致。原句“started... since as a primary school”不合语法,应改为“start to learn in primary school”表示普遍事实;描述过去个人经历要用过去时“didn't... when I was young”;现在尝试用现在进行时“I'm trying”。建议:区分一般事实(现在时)和过去具体经历(过去时),并用正确的时间状语和人称代词。
× I recent I recently I have uh make some make some practice in the monkey type to improve my fluency in typing and my fasten my speed.
✓ Recently I have been practising on Monkeytype to improve my typing fluency and speed.
错误类型:介词使用不当与平台名称用法错误。原句用“in the monkey type”应为“on Monkeytype”(平台/网站通常用on);“make some practice”搭配不当,应为“practise on/ do practice on”。建议:常见表达是“practise on [website]”或“do practice on [site]”。
× Recently I am uh trying to practice with online typing tests, ensure daily exercise uh in the website called Monkey type to improve my skills and also to fasten my speed.
✓ Recently I have been trying to practise with online typing tests, doing daily exercises on the website called Monkeytype to improve my skills and increase my speed.
错误类型:动词+ing形式及动词搭配错误。原句“ensure daily exercise in the website”不自然,应使用“doing daily exercises on the website”;“fasten my speed”用词错误,应为“increase/improve my speed”。建议:用现在完成进行时强调近期持续动作,使用正确的动词+ing 结构和介词搭配(doing ... on)。