Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and use clear sentence structure: start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors (e.g., subject-verb agreement, articles, and tenses). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly and keep responses under five sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting because it helps me relax after a stressful day. For example, I usually write two to three pages daily in a journal, which improves my handwriting and gives me ideas to talk about later.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and simplify the opening phrase. Use correct verb forms and more precise vocabulary (e.g., 'comfortable' or 'portable' instead of 'very good vibe'). Keep one or two supporting reasons and link them with 'because' or 'so'.

Ejemplo: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because it is portable and convenient for my daily routine. It is also comfortable to use for long periods, especially when I move between classes or home.

Sugerencia: Give a clear time reference and one concise supporting detail. Avoid filler words and repeated fragments. Use a simple past tense correctly (e.g., 'I learned to type in fifth grade') and add a brief reason or context.

Ejemplo: I learned to type in fifth grade when our school introduced a computer class. In that course I learned the keyboard layout and basic typing technique.

Sugerencia: State methods clearly and in order. Use correct tense and fewer repetitions. Mention specific actions and frequency (e.g., 'I practice daily, take lessons, and learn shortcut keys'), and link ideas with 'and' or 'for example'.

Ejemplo: I have improved my typing in the past two years by taking coaching classes and practicing daily. For example, my teacher taught me keyboard shortcuts and specific techniques, which I practice for 20 minutes each day.

× If you as my perspective, I usually prefer to to do handwriting because it it give me relaxed from the stressed and hectic day.

✓ If you ask for my perspective, I usually prefer handwriting because it relaxes me after a stressful and hectic day.

The original uses incorrect pronoun phrase 'If you as my perspective' and repeated words. Use 'ask for my perspective' to introduce opinion. 'Handwriting' (noun) is idiomatic; do not use 'to do handwriting'. Subject-verb agreement: 'it it give me' should be 'it relaxes me' (third-person singular). Use 'stressful' not 'stressed' to describe the day. Suggestions: replace phrase with 'If you ask for my perspective' and ensure subject-verb agreement for 'relaxes'.

× If I write 2-3 pages daily on the regular basis it it also enhances my writing and give me give me very valuable thing I can talk about.

✓ If I write two or three pages daily on a regular basis, it also improves my writing and gives me valuable things to talk about.

Remove duplicated words and fix number formatting and article use: use 'two or three' and 'on a regular basis'. Verb agreement: 'it it also enhances' -> 'it also improves'; 'give me give me' -> 'gives me'. 'Very valuable thing I can talk about' is vague—use plural 'valuable things to talk about'. Suggestions: avoid repetition, ensure subject-verb agreement, and use clear pluralization when appropriate.

× Since we if talk about the whole day or every day on the routine, I usually prefer a laptop keyboard because it is convenient to use and it also give me very good vibe to use while using that.

✓ If we talk about using a keyboard every day, I usually prefer a laptop keyboard because it is convenient and gives me a good vibe when I use it.

The original contains disfluent phrase 'Since we if talk' and unnecessary words 'on the routine'. Simplify to 'If we talk about using a keyboard every day'. Subject-verb agreement: 'it also give me' -> 'it gives me'. Avoid awkward repetition 'to use while using that'—use 'when I use it'. Suggestions: simplify conditional phrasing and ensure verb agreement.

× Yes, definitely. I learned a keyboard typing when I was in my class 5th I have I have added a new domain that is computer and then I Start learning about the key keyboard, how to how, what about the what about the keyboard and how it works so on.

✓ Yes, definitely. I learned keyboard typing when I was in fifth grade. My school added a new subject, computer studies, and then I started learning about the keyboard and how it works.

Use correct past tense: 'learned' is fine but 'Start' should be 'started'. Remove repeated phrases 'I have I have' and awkward wording 'class 5th' -> 'fifth grade'. 'Added a new domain' is nonstandard—use 'added a new subject'. Simplify 'how to how, what about the what about the keyboard' to 'how it works'. Suggestions: use proper past tense verbs, avoid repetition, and use standard educational terms.

× It is definitely improve my typing from since the past two in uh to this to to this time I have uh taking some kind of coaching classes from the several teacher and I learned several kind of shortcut keys and very various kind of various kind of technique and strategies from my teacher.

✓ It has definitely improved my typing over the past two years. I have been taking coaching classes with several teachers, and I have learned many shortcut keys and various techniques and strategies from them.

Correct tense and aspect: use present perfect 'has improved' for an action continuing to present. Replace vague 'from since the past two' with 'over the past two years'. For ongoing classes, use present perfect continuous 'have been taking' or present perfect 'have taken'. Correct plural agreement 'several teacher' -> 'several teachers' and remove repetition. Use 'many' or 'various' consistently and pluralize 'technique' to 'techniques'. Suggestions: choose appropriate perfect tense forms for actions that started in the past and continue, fix number agreement, and remove filler words.