Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I prefer typing because for me it's all about convenience. I always don't have a lot of extra time on handwriting because I always have lots of schools to do so. I hit with wasting time on handwriting.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
I always tap on a laptop keyboard because it's convenient for me. I I could move it everywhere and it didn't cost my extra.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
I learned a typo on the keyboard after I finished my primary school because at that time I realized that I I must type a lot in my in my future.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
At first I just trying to remember the the words on the keyboard ranking. After that I turned to learning on the uh helping teacher app apps.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 回答要更直接且语法准确,减少重复并用连接词组织理由。具体改进:1) 首句直接回答问题(I prefer typing.)。2) 用一到两句给出明确原因并用连接词如 because 或 since。3) 避免重复短语(如 always)并使用正确表达(例如 "I don't have much spare time")。4) 控制在最多五句且注意时态和搭配("schoolwork" 而非 "schools")。
Ejemplo: I prefer typing because it is much more convenient. Since I have a lot of schoolwork and little spare time, typing helps me finish tasks faster and keeps my notes neater.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: 提高流利度和准确性,使用自然搭配并修正语法错误。具体改进:1) 直接说明使用哪种设备(I use a laptop.)。2) 用连词说明原因(because / as)。3) 用正确表达移动方便(portable / I can take it anywhere)并避免错误短语("didn't cost my extra" 无意义,应说 "doesn't cost extra" 或删去)。
Ejemplo: I use a laptop keyboard every day because it's portable and convenient. I can take it anywhere, and it meets all my needs for study and work.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 改进时间表达和措辞,纠正错误词汇并去除口语填充词。具体改进:1) 使用正确短语(learn to type, not learned a typo)。2) 明确时间点(after primary school / when I was in middle school)。3) 用简单句子说明原因并避免重复("I realized I would need to type a lot in the future")。
Ejemplo: I learned to type on a keyboard after I finished primary school because I realized I would need to type a lot for my studies in the future.
How do you improve your typing?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: 回答需更清晰地描述练习方法并使用正确语法与词汇。具体改进:1) 用过去或现在完成时准确描述过程(At first I tried... Then I started using...)。2) 使用恰当词汇("keys layout" 或 "keyboard layout" 而非 "words on the keyboard ranking";"tutorial apps" 或 "typing tutor apps")。3) 提供具体练习细节(每天练习多长时间、使用哪些功能如 lessons, timed tests)。
Ejemplo: At first I tried to memorise the keyboard layout by practising typing simple sentences. Then I started using a typing tutor app that offers lessons and timed tests to increase my speed and accuracy.
× I prefer typing because for me it's all about convenience.
✓ I prefer typing because, for me, it's all about convenience.
原句本身含义通顺,但缺少必要的逗号以分隔插入语“for me”。这不是词性错误,而是标点影响流畅性。建议在插入语前后加逗号,使句子更自然。
× I always don't have a lot of extra time on handwriting because I always have lots of schools to do so.
✓ I don't always have a lot of extra time for handwriting because I always have a lot of schoolwork to do.
原句中“always don't have”词序不当,应为“don't always have”。“on handwriting”应该用介词“for”。“lots of schools”意思错误,应该是“schoolwork(学业、作业)”,且用“a lot of”更自然。建议调整词序并使用正确名词。
× I hit with wasting time on handwriting.
✓ I hate wasting time on handwriting.
原句“hit with”是错误搭配,应为“hate”表示“讨厌、受不了”。句子结构不正确,需要替换动词并直接用动名词短语“wasting time”。建议记住常见情感动词搭配动名词。
× I always tap on a laptop keyboard because it's convenient for me.
✓ I usually type on a laptop keyboard because it's convenient for me.
“tap on a laptop keyboard”在此语境不自然,常用动词为“type”。另外“always”放在这里不太合适,改用“usually”更符合频率副词用法。建议使用常见搭配“type on a laptop”。
× I I could move it everywhere and it didn't cost my extra.
✓ I can move it anywhere and it doesn't cost me extra.
原句有重复“I I”。时态和情态不一致,应使用一般现在时“can”和“doesn't”。“everywhere”在这里改为“anywhere”更合适;“didn't cost my extra”语法和代词错误,应为“doesn't cost me extra”。建议注意人称代词和时态一致性。
× I learned a typo on the keyboard after I finished my primary school because at that time I realized that I I must type a lot in my in my future.
✓ I learned to type on the keyboard after I finished primary school because at that time I realized that I would have to type a lot in my future.
原句“learned a typo”错误,正确应为“learned to type”。“primary school”前不需要定冠词。重复“I I”。“must”在叙述过去时的背景中应使用过去将来或“would have to”。建议使用“不定式learned to do”结构并使时态一致。
× At first I just trying to remember the the words on the keyboard ranking.
✓ At first I was just trying to remember the words on the keyboard layout.
原句缺少助动词,应为“was trying”。“the the”重复。“keyboard ranking”用词不当,正确为“keyboard layout”(键盘布局)或“key positions”。建议使用正确的名词搭配并注意过去进行时的结构(was/were + -ing)。
× After that I turned to learning on the uh helping teacher app apps.
✓ After that I turned to learning on the teacher-helping apps.
原句“learning on the uh helping teacher app apps”冗长且介词使用不当。改为“learning on the teacher-helping apps”或“using apps that help with typing”。建议简化表达,正确放置介词“on”并使用复数或单数一致的名词形式。