Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid unnecessary words and finish the sentence. Use correct pronouns and verb forms.

Ejemplo: I usually prefer typing for professional tasks but handwriting for personal notes. For example, at work I type case studies and reports on my desktop because the software and files are stored there; however, I handwrite quick study notes or grocery lists because writing by hand helps me concentrate.

Sugerencia: Good clear answer and relevant details. Improve coherence by combining short sentences with linking words and a stronger topic sentence. Correct minor grammar (everyday -> every day; plural consistency).

Ejemplo: Yes, I type on a desktop every day. As a dietitian I create many diet plans and compile reports, and I also prepare posture and facial analysis reports, so I prefer the desktop because the necessary software and data are installed on it.

Sugerencia: Answer should be more naturally structured and grammatically correct. Start with a clear time phrase, then explain briefly how you learned using linking words. Avoid awkward phrases like 'for the same' and correct verb forms.

Ejemplo: I learned to type during my university years when I had my first project that required a computer. I didn't own a laptop, so I asked a friend for help; she patiently taught me how to type, and after some practice I became comfortable using the keyboard.

Sugerencia: Use correct article and verb forms, be concise, and use linking words to show results. Avoid vague phrases like 'incredible result' and 'pretty much better' — give a clear improvement description.

Ejemplo: I recently downloaded an app that helps improve typing, and it produced noticeable results. For example, after practising with the app for a few weeks I increased my typing speed and can now type on the desktop without looking at the keyboard, so I also recommended it to my son.

× It depends upon their kind of task I am doing.

✓ It depends on the kind of task I am doing.

Incorrect pronoun 'their' does not agree with the speaker; use a neutral construction 'the kind of task' and 'depends on' is the correct preposition. Use 'on' not 'upon' for natural modern English. Suggestion: say 'It depends on the kind of task I'm doing.'

× While I'm in my office preparing some case studies and analysing the reports, then I prefer to do work on my desktop.

✓ While I'm in my office preparing case studies and analysing reports, I prefer to work on my desktop.

Redundant 'then' is unnecessary; 'prefer to do work' is awkward — use 'prefer to work'. Also drop articles before plural nouns 'case studies' and 'reports'. Keep present continuous 'I'm preparing' consistent. Suggestion: 'While I'm in my office preparing case studies and analysing reports, I prefer to work on my desktop.'

× But when I'm making my own notes regarding my education as well as regarding the grocery list, then I prefer write it down on paper because that helps me to concentrate and.

✓ But when I'm making my own notes for my studies or for my grocery list, I prefer to write them down on paper because that helps me to concentrate.

Pronoun and number errors: 'write it down' should match plural 'notes' -> 'write them down'. 'Regarding my education' is better as 'for my studies'. Remove trailing 'and.' and redundant 'then'. Also use 'helps me to concentrate' or simply 'helps me concentrate.' Suggestion: '...I prefer to write them down on paper because that helps me concentrate.'

× Yes, I use my desktop everyday.

✓ Yes, I use my desktop every day.

Two errors: 'everyday' (adjective) vs 'every day' (adverbial phrase) — use 'every day' to mean 'each day'. Article 'my desktop' is fine. Suggestion: 'I use my desktop every day.'

× Being a dietitian I create lots of diet plan and compile reports.

✓ Being a dietitian, I create many diet plans and compile reports.

Plural and quantifier: 'lots of' is informal; 'diet plan' should be plural 'diet plans'. Add comma after introductory clause. Use 'many' for countable plural. Suggestion: 'I create many diet plans and compile reports.'

× I also prepare posture and facial analysis report.

✓ I also prepare posture and facial analysis reports.

Noun number and article: 'report' should be plural to match general statement. Alternatively use an article: 'a posture and facial analysis report' if singular. Suggestion: 'I also prepare posture and facial analysis reports.'

× So I prefer my desktop because the required software and data is installed on it.

✓ So I prefer my desktop because the required software and data are installed on it.

Subject-verb agreement: compound subject 'software and data' takes plural verb 'are', not 'is'. Preposition 'on' is acceptable. Suggestion: '...software and data are installed on it.'

× During my graduation years, it was the first time when I was given a project although I hadn't laptop or personal computer at that time, I approached my friend for the same and I was hopeless at typing but she taught me conveniently and I able to use it on the same.

✓ During my university years, it was the first time I was given a project. Although I didn't have a laptop or personal computer at that time, I asked a friend for help. I was hopeless at typing, but she taught me patiently and I was able to use it then.

Multiple errors: 'graduation years' is better 'university years'; run-on sentence should be split. Use past tense 'didn't have' not 'hadn't laptop'. Use 'asked a friend for help' not 'approached my friend for the same'. 'Hopeless at typing' is acceptable but 'patiently' better than 'conveniently'. Missing auxiliary 'was' in 'I was able'. 'on the same' is incorrect — use 'then' or 'after that'. Suggestion: break into clearer past-tense sentences and use correct auxiliaries and collocations.

× I recently downloaded a app that assist in improved typing and I had incredible result for using it.

✓ I recently downloaded an app that assists with improving my typing, and I had incredible results from using it.

Article 'a' before vowel sound should be 'an'. Verb agreement: 'assist' -> 'assists' to agree with 'app' (third person singular). Use 'improving' or 'improved' with 'with'. 'Result' should be plural 'results' and preposition 'from' or 'by' not 'for'. Suggestion: 'I recently downloaded an app that assists with improving my typing, and I had incredible results from using it.'

× I also recommended this same to my son and these days my writing speed has increased pretty much better and moreover I can type on desktop without looking at the keyboard.

✓ I also recommended the same app to my son, and these days my typing speed has improved a lot; moreover, I can type on the desktop without looking at the keyboard.

Pronoun and noun clarity: 'this same' should be 'the same app'. 'Writing speed' changed to 'typing speed' for accuracy. 'Has increased pretty much better' is ungrammatical; use 'has improved a lot'. Add article 'the' before 'desktop'. Use punctuation to separate clauses. Suggestion: 'I recommended the same app to my son, and my typing speed has improved a lot; I can now type on the desktop without looking at the keyboard.'