Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases (e.g., "since I can", "I can relate"). Improve vocabulary by using phrases like "more convenient" and "faster".

Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s faster and more convenient. For example, I can edit text quickly and store documents on my laptop, which saves time and reduces clutter.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer, then one or two specific reasons. Avoid vague or confused phrases like "study lighting". Use linking words (because, so) correctly and keep sentences short and logical.

Ejemplo: Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day because I study and write essays on it. It’s portable, so I can work in different places, and the battery lasts long enough for study sessions.

Sugerencia: Correct factual mistakes and hesitations: say the answer directly and avoid repetition. Provide a short reason or context using linking words (because, when). Pronunciation and fluency matter; practice to reduce pauses.

Ejemplo: I learned to type when I was about 11, after my father bought me a computer for my birthday, so he encouraged me to practice regularly.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific method and result. Fix grammar ("I use a Japanese typing game to compete for faster times"). Use linking words like "by" and "so" to show cause and effect.

Ejemplo: I improve my typing by practising with a Japanese typing game that times me, so I try to beat my previous speed. This helps me type more accurately and makes practice enjoyable.

× I prefer typing since I can.

✓ I prefer typing because I can.

The student used 'since' to mean 'because'. While 'since' can mean 'because', it can also indicate time and can be ambiguous. Replacing with 'because' makes the reason clear. Keep present simple 'prefer'.

× I'm good at typing so it is very useful for me.

✓ I'm good at typing, so it is very useful for me.

Two independent clauses are joined without a comma. Add a comma before 'so' to connect the clauses correctly. The grammar tense and forms are otherwise correct.

× And typing is easier than handwriting because it won't take so much time and I can relate easily, so that's why I think so.

✓ Typing is easier than handwriting because it doesn't take as much time and I can type more quickly, so I prefer it.

Multiple issues: 'And' at sentence start is unnecessary; 'won't take so much time' mixes future 'won't' with a general statement—use present 'doesn't'; 'so much' is informal—use 'as much'; 'I can relate easily' is incorrect in this context—likely meant 'I can type more easily or quickly'; 'so that's why I think so' is redundant. Rewriting clarifies meaning and corrects tense and word choice.

× Actually I use laptop keyboard every day and since I have to study for IELTS, so I use it when I like, when I study lighting.

✓ I use my laptop keyboard every day because I have to study for the IELTS, so I use it whenever I want, for studying or reading.

Problems: missing possessive 'my' before 'laptop'; 'since I have to' and 'so' together is redundant—use one conjunction; 'when I like' is informal—'whenever I want' is clearer; 'when I study lighting' likely incorrect word 'lighting'—context suggests 'writing' or 'reading'; choose 'studying or reading' to fit exam context. Maintain present simple tense.

× Lighting or reading it is very useful for me and I can bring it easily and quickly.

✓ Writing or reading on it is very useful for me, and I can carry it easily and quickly.

'Lighting' is wrong word; likely 'writing'. Add 'on it' to specify using the laptop. Replace 'bring' with 'carry' when referring to the laptop. Add comma before 'and'.

× Yeah, definitely.

✓ Yes, definitely.

Colloquial 'Yeah' is acceptable in speech, but 'Yes' is more appropriate in a test context. This is a style suggestion rather than a strict grammatical error.

× I learned how to eat when I was 11, and since my father bought bought me a computer for my birthday, so I have to, I, I have to, I have to learn how to type.

✓ I learned how to type when I was 11 because my father bought me a computer for my birthday, so I had to learn how to type.

Multiple errors: 'eat' is incorrect word; should be 'type'. 'bought' duplicated. Using 'since' and 'so' together is redundant—use 'because'. Sequence of events requires past tense: 'had to learn' rather than present 'have to'. Remove stammering. This corrects past-tense narration and word choice.

× So my father told me.

✓ My father told me to learn.

Original is vague and a sentence fragment in context. Clarify what the father told the student to do. Keep past tense 'told'.

× I improve my typing by using it is Japanese typing game and compete the far the faster of typing.

✓ I improve my typing by using a Japanese typing game and competing to become faster at typing.

Errors: 'it is' unnecessary; need an article 'a' before 'Japanese typing game'; 'compete the far the faster of typing' is ungrammatical—use 'competing to become faster at typing'. Use gerund 'competing' after 'by'. Maintain present simple for habitual action.

× It's very interesting and I can learn how to type with fun.

✓ It's very interesting and I can learn how to type while having fun.

'With fun' is incorrect; use 'while having fun' or 'in a fun way'. This fixes adverbial phrase use and improves naturalness.