Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cần nói rõ rành mạch, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và loại bỏ tiếng ngập ngừng. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, dùng thì đúng (present simple), thay “when I'm write” bằng “when I write” và dùng từ phù hợp như “cross it out” thay vì “cross it”. Hãy mở rộng bằng lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: faster, neater, easier to edit) và dùng liên từ như “because” hoặc “so” để kết nối ý. Giữ độ dài tối đa 4-5 câu.

Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and easier to correct mistakes. For example, when I type on my laptop I can simply press backspace to delete errors, so my work looks neater. I also find typed documents easier to share and edit with others.

Sugerencia: Cần trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi (desktop hay laptop) và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (subject-verb agreement, verb forms). Tránh lặp từ và tiếng ngập ngừng. Bắt đầu với câu chủ đề: “I use a laptop” hoặc “I use a desktop”, rồi giải thích ngắn gọn lý do, dùng linking words như “because” và động từ đúng: “I am preparing” thay vì “I has arrived”. Giữ 2–4 câu rõ ràng và cụ thể.

Ejemplo: I usually type on a laptop every day because I use it to practice my IELTS writing. Since my exam is coming up, I spend a lot of time typing essays on my laptop to improve my speed and accuracy.

Sugerencia: Cần trả lời rõ thời điểm bằng cách nói “I learned to type in primary school” và tránh lặp từ/tiếng ngập ngừng. Sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng, bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ tên trò chơi hoặc hoạt động) và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc. Sửa ngữ pháp (let us play, we had to type) và dùng thì phù hợp.

Ejemplo: I learned to type in primary school when my teachers gave us computers to use. We often played typing games where we had to type quickly to win, which helped me improve my accuracy and made learning fun.

Sugerencia: Cần trả lời cụ thể phương pháp cải thiện (practice, online exercises, typing tests) và dùng thì đúng (I improve my typing by...). Tránh tiếng ngập ngừng và hoàn thành câu ý nghĩa. Dùng linking words như “by” hoặc “so” để nối lý do và kết quả. Nên đưa ra ví dụ cụ thể (số giờ luyện, trang web, bộ gõ).

Ejemplo: I improve my typing by practising on my laptop every day, usually for 30–60 minutes. I use online typing tests and exercises to increase my speed and accuracy, so over time my typing has become much faster and more reliable.

× Of course typing. I always use my laptop for typing because when I'm write, uh, typing wrong, I can just backspace to delete it.

✓ Of course typing. I always use my laptop for typing because when I write something wrong, I can just press backspace to delete it.

The sentence used 'I'm write' which is incorrect: the verb 'write' should be in the base form after 'I' as a simple present 'I write' or in this context 'when I write something wrong'. Also 'typing wrong' is awkward; use 'write something wrong' or 'make a mistake while typing'. Suggestion: use 'when I write something wrong, I can just press backspace' to clearly express the ability to correct mistakes.

× But when I do handwriting, I have to use my pen to cross it and I think that was very dirty.

✓ But when I handwrite, I have to cross it out with my pen, and I think that is very messy.

'Do handwriting' is incorrect; the verb form is 'handwrite'. 'Cross it' should be 'cross it out' to mean delete written text. Tense 'was' should be 'is' because the statement is general. 'Dirty' is not the best collocation; 'messy' suits the context. Suggestion: use present tense and correct verb phrases: 'when I handwrite, I have to cross it out with my pen, and I think that is very messy.'

× Of course keyboard I always use my computer for training my IELTS writing, so I always doing that because I has almost arrived my exam test, so I have to study very hard.

✓ Of course, keyboard. I always use my computer to practice my IELTS writing, so I always do that because my exam is almost here, so I have to study very hard.

Multiple issues: missing punctuation and unnatural phrases. 'Training my IELTS writing' should be 'practice my IELTS writing'. 'I always doing that' is incorrect; use 'I always do that' (present simple). 'I has almost arrived my exam test' is ungrammatical: correct form is 'my exam is almost here' or 'my test is coming up'. Also 'exam test' is redundant; use 'exam' or 'test'. Suggestion: use present simple 'I always do', correct verb 'practice', and idiomatic 'my exam is almost here.'

× I think it's worth on my primary school, I think, uh, we, my teachers always gave us a computer and let we play the game that we have to type to win the game.

✓ I think it started in primary school. I think my teachers always gave us a computer and let us play a game in which we had to type to win.

'Worth on my primary school' is incorrect; use 'started in primary school' or 'at primary school'. 'Let we' should be 'let us' (pronoun error). 'Play the game that we have to type to win the game' is repetitive and tense mismatch; use 'play a game in which we had to type to win.' Suggestion: use 'let us' and correct preposition 'in primary school' or phrase 'started in primary school', and match past tense 'had to type' for past events.

× And as at that age, I think it was very good game for children.

✓ At that age, I think it was a very good game for children.

Awkward phrasing 'And as at that age' - use 'At that age'. Missing article 'a' before 'very good game'. Tense 'was' is correct for past. Suggestion: simplify to 'At that age, it was a very good game for children.'

× When I'm training my IELTS, I use lap my laptop very much.

✓ When I'm preparing for my IELTS, I use my laptop very much.

'Training my IELTS' is unnatural; use 'preparing for my IELTS'. 'Use lap my laptop' is incorrect word order and extra word 'lap'. Correct order is 'use my laptop'. Suggestion: say 'When I'm preparing for my IELTS, I use my laptop a lot.'

× So that's the reason why my typing was uh, increase the uh, speed and the.

✓ So that's the reason why my typing has increased in speed.

'Typing was increase' mixes past tense with base verb incorrectly. Use present perfect 'has increased' to show change up to now. 'Increase the speed' should be 'increased in speed' or 'become faster'. The sentence was incomplete; provide a concise completion. Suggestion: use 'my typing has increased in speed' or 'my typing has become faster.'