Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct vocabulary mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and give one specific example with correct word choice (e.g., "long text" not "loan text"). Use a linking phrase to connect the reason and example.

Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and more convenient. For example, when I need to write long emails to my family or prepare essays for university, typing lets me edit quickly and save time.

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitations and choose precise words. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then add two brief supporting details using linking words (e.g., "also", "sometimes"). Replace vague phrases like "technological homework" with clearer terms such as "online assignments".

Ejemplo: I type on my laptop every day. I use it mainly to write emails and complete online assignments for my courses, and I also chat with friends to plan events.

Sugerencia: Fix grammar and tense errors and make the answer chronological and concise. Start with a clear time reference, then describe who taught you and one specific method. Avoid run-on sentences and unclear phrases like "in persons" and "finished all the exercise."

Ejemplo: I learned to type when I was 13. My mother taught me on a desktop computer, and I practiced with typing games, which I found fun and helpful for improving speed and accuracy.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition and choose appropriate adjectives. Give a clear method and one concrete detail about frequency or type of game. Use a linking word to show continuation from previous answer.

Ejemplo: As I mentioned, I improve my typing mainly by playing typing games. I play for about 20 minutes a day, focusing on speed and accuracy, and I track my progress using online tests.

× Yeah, it's definitely.

✓ Yes, definitely.

The student used a fragment 'Yeah, it's definitely.' which is vague and informal. Replace 'Yeah' with 'Yes' for formality and remove 'it's' to make a clear affirmative response that fits the question context.

× I do prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and more convenient, especially when I need to type some loan text.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient, especially when I need to type some long text.

The phrase 'I do prefer' is unnecessary emphatic; use simple present 'I prefer'. 'Loan text' is a word choice error; likely 'long text'. Also expand contractions for clarity and formality.

× For instance, I always use it to send loan emails to my families and friends, but also I can also use it for my study.

✓ For instance, I always use it to send emails to my family and friends, and I can also use it for my studies.

'Loan emails' should be 'emails'; 'families' is incorrect plural for family members—use 'family'. 'But also I can also' is redundant; use 'and I can also'. 'For my study' should be 'for my studies' to indicate academic work.

× Yes, definitely. I type on the laptop keyboard every day.

✓ Yes, definitely. I type on a laptop keyboard every day.

Use the indefinite article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard' because the student refers to any laptop keyboard they use daily, not a specific one.

× I usually use it to send emails and finish some, uh, technological homework online for my study.

✓ I usually use it to send emails and finish some technological homework online for my studies.

'Technological homework' is awkward; 'technical' or simply 'homework' is better but kept 'technological' per original. Remove the filler 'uh' and change 'for my study' to 'for my studies'. No article needed before 'homework'.

× And sometimes I use it to, umm, talk and chat with my friends to plan something.

✓ Sometimes I also use it to talk and chat with my friends to plan things.

Remove fillers 'umm'. Place 'also' correctly. 'Plan something' is vague; use 'plan things' or 'make plans' for natural phrasing.

× I learn how to type on the keyboard in my 13 and my mother has taught me in persons on the desktop and it's quite interesting and amusing to exercise by the game and I have finished all the exercise to type on the keyboard.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was 13, and my mother taught me in person on a desktop. It was quite interesting and fun to practice with a game, and I finished all the typing exercises.

Tense and word choice errors: use past tense 'learned' and 'when I was 13'. 'In persons' should be 'in person'. 'On the desktop' -> 'on a desktop'. 'Amusing to exercise by the game' -> 'fun to practice with a game'. 'Finished all the exercise' -> 'finished all the typing exercises'.

× As I just mentioned earlier, I always enhance improve my typing by games.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, I always improve my typing with games.

'Enhance improve' is redundant; choose 'improve'. 'By games' is awkward—use 'with games'. Also 'just mentioned earlier' is repetitive; 'As I mentioned earlier' is sufficient.

× All of them are really interesting and entertaining, so stirring to do so.

✓ They are really interesting and entertaining, so they are enjoyable to do.

'Stirring to do so' is incorrect collocation. Replace with 'enjoyable to do' and simplify subject reference to 'they'.

× So I'm really interested in typing and improving my typing skills.

✓ So I am really interested in typing and in improving my typing skills.

Add parallel preposition structure 'in typing and in improving' for clarity and balance; expand contraction for formality.