Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I think it depends on for maybe take notes. When I at school I'm more preferring to handwriting 'cause it also help me to remember things. But umm, maybe write some assignments? I think I more prefer to doing on computer than more efficiency and.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Umm, I think most of the time 'cause my school also offer us to use laptop to, uh, recording notes on it. And sometimes I will also uh, to write some uh, assignments and write some, uh, paper and essay on my computer. So I will type it on my desktop.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
I think first time I learned how to type on a keyboard is in primary school 'cause we got the, uh, the typing class and the computer class. So it will also always to provide us a computer and to do some exercise on the keyboard.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
I think now I got multiple ways to improve your typing, not only on the computer also now everyone got their phones and the phones daily messages also type, uh, improve your typing skills and also umm, there's a website that could do some exercise and quiz for, uh, ask for your typing skills.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 注意句子結構和時態,使回答更直接流暢;減少填充詞(如 "umm", "maybe"),用連接詞連貫句子;保持答案在五句以內並包含一個主題句及一到兩個具體細節或例子。可練習把理由和比較表達清楚,例如先說明偏好,再比較兩者的優缺點。
Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting for taking notes at school because writing by hand helps me remember information better. However, for assignments and longer pieces of writing, I prefer typing on a computer because it is faster and makes editing easier.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答需更簡潔有組織,避免重複和過多含糊詞。先用一句話直接回答(桌機或筆電),然後提供一到兩個具體情境說明。注意用詞準確(desktop vs laptop)並保持時態一致。
Ejemplo: I usually type on a laptop because my school provides laptops for taking notes. For longer essays or projects, I sometimes use a desktop at home because the larger screen and keyboard are more comfortable.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 答案已包含時間和原因,但需要更自然的句子結構與流暢連接詞。去掉多餘填充語,使用清晰的時間詞(e.g. "when I was in primary school")並舉一個具體例子如練習內容或課程。
Ejemplo: I first learned to type when I was in primary school because we had typing and computer classes. In those lessons we practiced basic keys and completed simple typing exercises to improve speed and accuracy.
How do you improve your typing?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答要更具體,列出一到三種具體方法並說明效果;避免人稱混用(your vs my)。用連接詞組織:先總結方法,然後分別描述每種方法如何幫助提高打字。
Ejemplo: I improve my typing in several ways. First, I practice regularly on online typing websites that offer timed tests and accuracy feedback. Second, I type messages and notes on my phone and laptop every day, which helps increase my speed through frequent practice.
× I think it depends on for maybe take notes.
✓ I think it depends—maybe for taking notes.
句子结构混乱,使用了多余介词“on for”和不正确的动词形式。建议把短语整理为“depends”后接一个解释性短语,使用动名词“taking”表示目的或用途。示例:"I think it depends—maybe for taking notes."
× When I at school I'm more preferring to handwriting 'cause it also help me to remember things.
✓ When I'm at school I prefer handwriting because it also helps me remember things.
时态和动词形式错误:不应使用进行时态“am preferring”表示一般偏好,应用一般现在时“prefer”。另外“help”需加第三人称单数形式“helps”。去掉多余介词并简化从句。建议:使用一般现在时描述习惯或偏好,并保证主谓一致。
× But umm, maybe write some assignments? I think I more prefer to doing on computer than more efficiency and.
✓ But maybe for writing some assignments, I prefer doing them on a computer because it's more efficient.
句子结构不完整且比较级使用不当:原句缺主语和完整从句,"more prefer to doing"是不正确的表达。应使用“prefer doing”或“prefer to do”,并用完整的比较结构“because it's more efficient”。建议重写为完整句并正确使用动词不定式或动名词以及比较结构。
× Umm, I think most of the time 'cause my school also offer us to use laptop to, uh, recording notes on it.
✓ Most of the time, because my school also offers us laptops to record notes on.
结构和动词形式错误:因果从句位置混乱,并且主语与动词不一致(school -> offers)。动词“record”应为不定式或动词原形“to record”,而不是“to, uh, recording”。建议把因果关系放在句首或用完整从句,注意主谓一致和不定式用法。
× And sometimes I will also uh, to write some uh, assignments and write some, uh, paper and essay on my computer.
✓ And sometimes I also write assignments, papers, and essays on my computer.
动词形式和重复问题:不应同时使用“will”与不定式“to write”来表示习惯,直接使用一般现在时“write”。复数名词“papers”和“essays”更自然。建议用简洁的现在时表述经常性动作,并用正确的名词复数形式。
× So I will type it on my desktop.
✓ So I type them on my desktop.
代词和时态:前文提到多项内容(assignments, papers, essays),应使用复数代词“them”。若表习惯则用一般现在时“type”。建议保持代词与先行词一致并使用一般现在时描述习惯。
× I think first time I learned how to type on a keyboard is in primary school 'cause we got the, uh, the typing class and the computer class.
✓ I think the first time I learned to type on a keyboard was in primary school because we had typing and computer classes.
时态与表达顺序错误:应使用过去时“was”、“learned”一致;“learned how to type”可简化为“learned to type”。“got...class”口语化且时态不当,改为“had ... classes”。建议统一使用过去时描述过去的经历,并使用更自然的表达。
× So it will also always to provide us a computer and to do some exercise on the keyboard.
✓ So they always provided us with computers for keyboard exercises.
句子主语、时态和介词使用错误:原句中“it will also always to provide us a computer”结构错误。应明确主语(they/the school),使用过去时“provided”,并用介词短语“provided us with computers”。建议使用清晰的主语并调整为正确的时态和介词搭配。
× I think now I got multiple ways to improve your typing, not only on the computer also now everyone got their phones and the phones daily messages also type, uh, improve your typing skills and also umm, there's a website that could do some exercise and quiz for, uh, ask for your typing skills.
✓ I think now I have multiple ways to improve my typing. Not only on computers—everyone has phones and typing daily messages helps improve typing skills—and there are websites that offer exercises and quizzes to practice typing.
人称、不一致和句子太长结构混乱:原句混用第一、第二、第三人称(I/your/everyone/the phones),并且重复冗长。应统一人称为第一人称(描述个人方法),用简洁句子分开不同观点。把“do some exercise and quiz for ask for your typing skills”改为“offer exercises and quizzes to practice typing”。建议统一人称,分句清晰,并用恰当动词短语(offer, help improve, practice)。