TypingPart 1 Informe

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Part 1

Examinador

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Candidato

I would like to handwrite it in my daily life because my skills of time period is very bad. So in some situations other people won't hide many words at the time, but I just can't type a word at that time.

Examinador

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Candidato

A laptop keyboard every day because this is my choice in studying off some courses and it is convenient for me to type in. And I used to eat too.

Examinador

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Candidato

This to teach us how to use computer. So at that time everyone need to learn about how to type on keyboard and we will practice it every day.

Examinador

How do you improve your typing?

Candidato

You can try to type the whole article on the Internet every day. With the time passed, you will notice that your typing speed will be faster.

Evaluación

Total

Total: 5.5Fluidez y coherencia: 5.5Pronunciación: 5.5Gramática: 5.5Recurso léxico: 5.5

Part 1

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Puntuación: 45.0

Sugerencia: 回答应更直接、逻辑清晰并补充具体原因。注意语法(时态、冠词、代词)和用词搭配。例如把“skills of time period”改为“typing speed/ability”,去掉不必要重复。保持不超过5句并使用连接词如“because”或“so”。

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting in daily life because my typing speed is quite slow. For example, when I need to take quick notes in class, I find handwriting faster and more reliable. Because of this, I often choose a notebook over a laptop for study notes.

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Puntuación: 40.0

Sugerencia: 回答应直接说明并给出具体原因,避免无关或混乱的信息(例如“used to eat”不相关)。注意句子连贯,使用合适词汇如“for studying”或“because it’s portable and convenient”。控制句子数量并保持清晰。

Ejemplo: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because it's portable and convenient for my studies. I usually use it to write essays and take online classes, so having a laptop makes it easier to study anywhere.

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Puntuación: 50.0

Sugerencia: 回答应包含时间点并更清楚陈述学习过程。注意语法(过去时)和连贯性,使用连接词如“when”或“after”。给出具体年级或年龄会更好。

Ejemplo: I learned how to type when I was in primary school, around age ten. At that time, our computer class taught basic typing skills and we practised for several minutes every day to improve accuracy and speed.

How do you improve your typing?

Puntuación: 65.0

Sugerencia: 回答方向正确但可更具体并用第一人称描述个人经验。给出具体方法(练习类型、工具、时长)并使用连接词如“for example”或“by doing this”。保持简洁且自然。

Ejemplo: I improve my typing by practising for 20 minutes each day using online typing tests and copying articles. For example, I use a typing website to track my accuracy and speed, and after a few weeks I noticed steady improvement.

Gramática

Singular and plural issue

× my skills of time period is very bad.

my sense of time is very bad.

原句中“skills of time period”搭配不自然且有数的一致问题。应使用固定表达“sense of time”(时间感),并且主语“my sense”为单数,谓语用“is”。建议:使用常见搭配并注意主谓一致。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× So in some situations other people won't hide many words at the time, but I just can't type a word at that time.

So in some situations other people can type many words at that time, but I just can't type any.

原句中用词混乱:'won't hide many words'与语境不符,应为能打出很多字。代词及否定搭配不当,最后部分应使用“any”表示否定的任何字。建议:根据语境选择正确动词并使用合适的限定词。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× A laptop keyboard every day because this is my choice in studying off some courses and it is convenient for me to type in.

I use a laptop keyboard every day because I choose it for studying some courses and it is convenient for me to type on.

原句缺主语动词(句子结构错误并涉及介词用法)。'choice in studying off some courses'不自然,应该是'choose it for studying some courses'。动词搭配应为'type on'(在键盘上打字)。建议:补全主语和谓语,使用常见短语和正确介词。

Sentence structure errors

× And I used to eat too.

Also, I used to eat while studying.

原句短且含义不明(句子结构不完整)。可能想表达“我以前也会吃(边学边吃)”或“我也会吃(在使用笔记本时)”。需补全谓语补语以明确意思。建议:提供完整信息,表意清晰。

Sentence structure errors

× This to teach us how to use computer.

This was to teach us how to use computers.

原句缺少谓语,时态也不明确。应补上过去时系动词'w as',并将'computer'改为复数或用'article'根据上下文。建议:确保句子包含主语、谓语并使用正确时态。

Subject-verb agreement errors

× So at that time everyone need to learn about how to type on keyboard and we will practice it every day.

So at that time everyone needed to learn how to type on a keyboard and we practiced it every day.

原句主谓不一致:'everyone'为单数,应与动词'stands'一致,时态也不一致。既然谈过去,应使用过去时'needed'和'practiced'。并且不需要'about',在'how to'结构中删去。建议:注意主语为不定代词时动词要用单数形式并保持时态一致。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× You can try to type the whole article on the Internet every day.

You can try typing a whole article from the Internet every day.

原句中'instead of 'to type the whole article on the Internet'结构不够自然;更地道表达为'try typing a whole article from the Internet'。此外用不定代词'a'更合适。建议:使用固定搭配'try + -ing'表示尝试某动作,并用'from the Internet'表示来源。

Present tense issue

× With the time passed, you will notice that your typing speed will be faster.

As time passes, you will notice that your typing speed becomes faster.

原句时态混用:'With the time passed'不自然且暗示过去,而后半句用将来时。应使用现在时'As time passes'配合将来结果'have/ will notice'或将来变化。建议:保持时态一致,常用表达为'As time passes/with time'。

Vocabulario

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