Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I prefer typing because it is easy to me to writing or typing is a useful and easy to my message under typing.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
I usually, uh, use a desktop because, uh, my company is. However, I part so everyone everyone take the desktop.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
Where I was a university student, I practiced typing on keyboard because UH student write report on the keyboard, so I practice more on university student.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
Uh, in my opinion, I my typing improved your S my skills so I practice every day for working.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 回答は短く明確にし、主語と動詞の一致や語順を正す必要があります。また、理由を一つか二つの具体例で補強してください。つなぎ言葉(because, so, therefore 等)を適切に使い、冗長な表現は避けましょう。
Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is faster and makes it easier to edit my work. For example, when I write emails or reports I can correct mistakes quickly, so my messages are clearer.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Puntuación: 30.0Sugerencia: 文を簡潔にし、不要な言い淀みや繰り返しを避けてください。理由を明確に述べ、接続詞(because, so, however)を正しく使って文の流れを作りましょう。
Ejemplo: I usually use a desktop keyboard at work because my company provides desktops for all employees. However, I sometimes use a laptop at home when I need to work remotely.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: 時制と語順を整え、大学時代に学んだことを明確に述べてください。具体的な状況や頻度を付け加えると説得力が増します。
Ejemplo: I learned to type when I was a university student. We had to submit reports online, so I practiced typing every week to improve my speed and accuracy.
How do you improve your typing?
Puntuación: 30.0Sugerencia: 主語と目的語を正しく使い、練習方法を具体的に述べてください。方法には頻度や使っているツール(タイピング練習ソフト、オンライン練習など)を含めると良いです。
Ejemplo: I improve my typing by practising every day for about 20 minutes using online typing tutorials and exercises. This helps me increase my speed and reduce mistakes when I type at work.
× I prefer typing because it is easy to me to writing or typing is a useful and easy to my message under typing.
✓ I prefer typing because it is easy for me to write, and typing is a useful and easy way to send my messages.
The errors involve prepositions and gerund/infinitive usage. Use 'easy for me to write' (correct preposition for personal experience) instead of 'easy to me to writing'. Use the infinitive 'to write' rather than the gerund 'writing' after 'easy for me to'. Replace 'easy to my message under typing' with 'easy way to send my messages' to convey the intended meaning clearly. Suggestion: use 'easy for someone to do' and choose between infinitive or gerund appropriately depending on the verb pattern. Grammar problem type ID: 11
× I usually, uh, use a desktop because, uh, my company is. However, I part so everyone everyone take the desktop.
✓ I usually use a desktop because my company provides desktops. However, I share it, so everyone uses the desktop.
The original contains sentence fragments and repetition. 'my company is' is incomplete; supply the verb 'provides' to complete the thought. 'I part' likely intended 'I share it' and 'everyone everyone take the desktop' should be 'everyone uses the desktop'. Suggestion: ensure each clause has a subject and verb and remove repeated words. Grammar problem type ID: 26
× Where I was a university student, I practiced typing on keyboard because UH student write report on the keyboard, so I practice more on university student.
✓ When I was a university student, I practiced typing on the keyboard because students wrote reports on the keyboard, so I practiced a lot at university.
Tense consistency errors: use past tense 'was' and match with 'practiced' and 'wrote' for actions completed in the past. Also fix word order and articles: 'on the keyboard' and 'at university'. Suggestion: keep past events in past tense and use correct articles and plural forms as needed. Grammar problem type ID: 5
× Uh, in my opinion, I my typing improved your S my skills so I practice every day for working.
✓ In my opinion, my typing has improved because I practice every day for work.
This sentence had mixed subjects and pronouns and incorrect tense. 'I my typing improved your S my skills' is garbled; correct form 'my typing has improved' uses present perfect to indicate improvement up to now. 'for working' should be 'for work'. Suggestion: use clear subject + verb structure and choose tense that matches the time frame (present perfect for past actions with present relevance). Grammar problem type ID: 26