Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer more concise, correct grammar, and add a clear topic sentence plus one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words (e.g., because, and, so) correctly and avoid repetition. Also correct verb forms and pronouns (e.g., “helps you” → “helps you”).

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting because it feels faster and helps me remember what I write. For example, when I take notes by hand I retain information better, so I often handwrite summaries after lectures to improve my learning.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear direct answer (desktop or laptop), fix verb choice and word forms (e.g., “tap” → “type”; “underwriting” → “handwriting”; “develop” → “development”), and avoid repeating the same reason. Give one specific reason with a short example and use linking words like “because” or “so”.

Ejemplo: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because it is portable and convenient for my work. For instance, I often move between home and café, so a laptop allows me to continue typing without interruption.

Sugerencia: Be concise and avoid repetition. Give a clear topic sentence stating the age and one succinct supporting detail explaining why you learned then. Correct small errors (remove extra words like “one”, “CS”) and use a linking word if adding detail.

Ejemplo: I learned to type when I was 15 because my parents gave me my first computer at that age. After I got the computer, I practiced regularly to get faster and more accurate.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear, organized response: state one main method and give a specific way to practice. Correct grammar (e.g., “stop type typing” → remove duplication; “typing has become”). Use linking words like “for example” or “by” to introduce specifics and avoid vague statements.

Ejemplo: The best way to improve typing is daily practice. For example, I use online typing tests for 15 minutes each day to focus on accuracy and speed, and I track my progress weekly to stay motivated.

× My personal opinion, I prefer handwriting because handwriting for me is faster than typing and also because handwriting will helps to you, will help you to improve your ability of writing with using your hands and I believe that is important try to improve your ability.

✓ My personal opinion is that I prefer handwriting because handwriting is faster for me than typing, and it will help you improve your writing ability using your hands, so I believe it is important to try to improve this ability.

Multiple issues: missing verb after 'My personal opinion' (sentence requires a linking verb), incorrect comparative structure ('faster for me than typing' is correct), incorrect use of 'will helps' (helps is present-tense; modal 'will' + base verb required), awkward phrase 'ability of writing with using your hands' (should be 'writing ability using your hands'), and missing 'to' in 'important try' (should be 'important to try'). Suggestion: include the verb 'is' after 'My personal opinion', use correct comparative 'faster for me than typing', use 'will help' (modal + base verb) or simply 'helps', restructure the phrase to 'help you improve your writing ability using your hands', and use the infinitive 'to try'.

× Yes, I usually keep, uh, I usually tap on a laptop keyboard because I will, I believe that is faster than underwriting and also because with the develop of new technology, we have to learn how to type on a laptop keyboard because I believe that is important.

✓ Yes, I usually use a laptop keyboard because I believe it is faster than handwriting, and because with the development of new technology, we have to learn how to type on a laptop keyboard; I believe that is important.

Errors include wrong verb choice 'keep' and 'tap' instead of 'use' or 'type', incorrect future 'I will, I believe' (redundant), 'underwriting' is wrong word for 'handwriting', and 'develop' should be the noun 'development'. Also subject-verb agreement 'it is faster' for the situation. Suggestion: replace with 'I usually use a laptop keyboard' or 'I usually type on a laptop keyboard', use 'handwriting', and 'development of new technology'. Remove redundant 'I will'.

× I learned how to type one on a keyboard when I was 15, CS when I was 15, because my mom and my dad gave me my first computer when I was 15.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was 15 because my mom and dad gave me my first computer then.

Original has repetition ('when I was 15' multiple times) and extraneous 'one' and 'CS'. Use simple past 'learned' is correct; simplify by stating it once and using 'then' to refer back. Suggestion: remove unnecessary words and repetition for clarity: 'I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was 15 because my parents gave me my first computer then.'

× The the best way to improve your typing is just stop type typing.

✓ The best way to improve your typing is to stop typing less and to practice typing every day.

Problems: duplicate 'The the', incorrect structure 'is just stop type typing' — after 'is' you need an infinitive ('to stop') or a gerund phrase properly formed. Also 'stop type typing' is incorrect; likely intended 'stop not typing' or 'practice typing'. Suggestion: use 'is to' + verb ('is to stop') or restructure: 'is to practice typing every day.' I provided a clearer alternative that fits intended meaning.

× If you want to improve how to type, type every single day.

✓ If you want to improve your typing, practice typing every day.

Awkward phrasing 'improve how to type' is non-idiomatic; use 'improve your typing'. Imperative 'type every single day' is grammatical but 'practice typing every day' is more natural. Suggestion: use noun 'typing' and verb 'practice' for clarity.

× And obviously like I said before, with the develop of new technology, typing is become more important than in the past.

✓ And obviously, as I said before, with the development of new technology, typing has become more important than in the past.

Errors: 'like I said' is informal; 'as I said' is better in this context; 'develop' should be 'development' (noun); 'typing is become' is incorrect — use present perfect 'has become' to indicate change over time. Suggestion: use 'has become' and 'development of new technology' for correct grammar and clarity.