Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Điểm chính: Cần sửa ngữ pháp, phát triển câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lan man và lặp từ; tăng tính mạch lạc bằng liên từ và chi tiết cụ thể. Cụ thể: (1) Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp cơ bản (ví dụ: "I'm prefer" → "I prefer"). (2) Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng ngắn gọn trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi. (3) Thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: cách viết tay giúp ghi chú dạng nào và vì sao) và dùng liên từ như "because", "so", "for example" để kết nối ý. (4) Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu, tránh từ không cần thiết và tiếng lắp ("Yeah").

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting because I'm not a fast typist and I find it easier to take quick notes by hand. For example, writing summaries and diagrams helps me remember key points better, so I often handwrite during lectures to organise ideas clearly.

Sugerencia: Điểm chính: Cần sửa ngữ pháp, câu trả lời phải rõ ràng và mạch lạc; loại bỏ mâu thuẫn (nói "laptop" rồi lại "desktop"); cung cấp lý do cụ thể và ngắn gọn. Cụ thể: (1) Trả lời trực tiếp (desktop hay laptop). (2) Giải thích ngắn gọn lý do sử dụng (hiệu suất, di động, tiện lợi). (3) Dùng liên từ hợp lý và tránh câu rời rạc. (4) Giữ 2–3 câu ngắn, đúng ngữ pháp.

Ejemplo: I usually type on a laptop because I own a MacBook and it's portable. It allows me to work anywhere and type quickly, which is useful when I study or write assignments on the go.

Sugerencia: Điểm chính: Cần sửa lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp, đưa ra mốc thời gian rõ ràng và chi tiết cụ thể về cách học. Cụ thể: (1) Nói rõ thời điểm (ví dụ: "when I was in primary school"). (2) Mô tả phương pháp học cụ thể (giáo viên hướng dẫn, luyện gõ, trang web sử dụng). (3) Dùng linking words như "then" hoặc "later" để nối ý. (4) Tránh nhầm lẫn từ ("tides"→"type", "speech"→"speed").

Ejemplo: I learned to type when I was in primary school, where my teacher introduced the basic keyboard layout. Later, I improved by using online typing tutorials and practising daily to increase my speed.

Sugerencia: Điểm chính: Cần sửa phát âm từ viết, ngữ pháp và số liệu; trình bày kế hoạch rõ ràng, có cấu trúc và chi tiết cụ thể về thời gian và phương pháp. Cụ thể: (1) Sửa lỗi từ ("fat"→"fast", "reviews"→"review", "speech"→"speed"). (2) Nêu kế hoạch cụ thể và logic (mốc thời gian rõ ràng, loại bài tập, mục tiêu). (3) Dùng linking words như "for example", "so that" để làm rõ mục đích. (4) Giữ 2–3 câu mạch lạc.

Ejemplo: I improve my typing by practising regularly; for example, I do 10–15 minutes of online typing exercises every day. I also learn proper typing techniques, such as correct finger placement, so that I can increase my speed and reduce mistakes.

× I'm prefer handwriting because I am not a very fast typist and I find it's easier to jot down the lessons by handwriting down.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I am not a very fast typist and I find it easier to jot down lessons by hand.

'I'm prefer' is incorrect because 'prefer' is a stative verb and should use simple present 'I prefer' (Incorrect use of pronouns/verb form). 'handwriting down' is redundant and unidiomatic; use 'by hand'. Remove 'the' before 'lessons' unless referring to specific lessons. Suggestion: use simple present for preferences and the phrase 'jot down lessons by hand'.

× Help me remember information better.

✓ It helps me remember information better.

This fragment lacks a subject and verb form matching the context. In context, the intended subject is 'it' (handwriting), so use 'It helps me...' to form a complete sentence. Suggestion: include subject 'it' to make a full sentence.

× Also I can write scribble with meticulous Yeah.

✓ Also, I can write neatly and with attention to detail.

'write scribble' is contradictory: 'scribble' is ungrammatical with 'write' in this sense. 'with meticulous' is wrong because 'meticulous' is an adjective and needs an adverbial phrase like 'with attention to detail' or use 'meticulously' (adverb). 'Yeah' is informal and misplaced. Suggestion: use 'neatly' or 'meticulously' and a clear structure.

× I usually type on laptop because I own a MacBook.

✓ I usually type on a laptop because I own a MacBook.

Countable singular nouns like 'laptop' require the indefinite article 'a' when speaking generally. Suggestion: use 'a laptop' for general statements.

× Is very useful and allows me to type quickly which help me work small evenly.

✓ It is very useful and allows me to type quickly, which helps me work more efficiently.

Sentence lacks subject 'It'. 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular noun 'which' referring to typing speed. 'work small evenly' is unidiomatic; likely 'work more efficiently' fits context. Suggestion: add subject and ensure subject-verb agreement and appropriate adverbial phrase.

× So I spend all the time on the desktop to learn either else exam and.

✓ So I spend most of my time on the computer studying for exams.

Original is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Spend all the time on the desktop' is awkward; 'most of my time on the computer' is natural. 'to learn either else exam and' is meaningless; likely intention is 'studying for exams'. Suggestion: rephrase to clear, natural English.

× I learned to tides when I walk at primary school, my teacher showed me the BASIS letters.

✓ I learned to type when I was in primary school; my teacher showed me the basic letters.

'to tides' is incorrect; should be 'to type'. 'walk at primary school' should be 'was in primary school' for past time. 'BASIS letters' likely means 'basic letters' (use lowercase). Also use past tense consistently. Suggestion: use 'learned to type' and 'was in primary school'.

× I taught myself more by using online tutorials and daily typings practice to improve my speech.

✓ I taught myself more by using online tutorials and daily typing practice to improve my speed.

'typings' is incorrect plural form; use 'typing practice'. 'improve my speech' is unlikely; context suggests 'speed' or 'typing speed'. Suggestion: choose the correct noun 'typing practice' and correct goal 'typing speed'.

× As I mentioned, I am not a fat typist, so I plan to reviews my lessons and practice regularly.

✓ As I mentioned, I am not a fast typist, so I plan to review my lessons and practice regularly.

'fat typist' is wrong word choice; should be 'fast typist'. 'reviews' should be base form 'review' after 'plan to'. Suggestion: use 'fast' and 'plan to review'.

× For example, I will do 15 to 12 minutes of online typing exercise each day and learn thought typing techniques to increase speech and reduce mistake.

✓ For example, I will do 10 to 15 minutes of online typing exercises each day and learn typing techniques to increase speed and reduce mistakes.

Number order should be '10 to 15 minutes' not '15 to 12'. 'exercise' should be plural 'exercises'. 'thought typing techniques' is wrong; use 'typing techniques'. 'increase speech' should be 'increase speed'. 'reduce mistake' should be plural 'reduce mistakes'. Suggestion: correct quantity order, plural forms, and word choices.