Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
Well, I prefer typing to be honest. My handwriting is a bit of terrible so I would like to type in rather than handwriting to let the others know what I mean. And also through typing I can write more faster so I will. I think typing typing is better for me.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Yes, honestly, uh, for our university students it, it is hard to avoid uh, typing on a laptop every day. Uh, so in our everyday life, always use typing to chat with the others or we just finish our homework or we just doing our own students work.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
Well, actually I didn't learn how to type on my keyboard. I would, I would like to say it is a, a learning by do by doing because when you are typing the more and you are become more in uh, fluent. So it is a practice as a period, yeah.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
Well as I mentioned before it is a learning by doing a process. So when you are doing more on your chatting and right assets your your typing will be improved.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Puntuación: 58.0Sugerencia: 回答要更自然、简洁并注意语法与连贯。开头给出明确主题句,然后用一两句具体理由支持,避免重复和语法错误(如“a bit of terrible”、“more faster”、“typing typing”)。用连词如“because”或“so”连接原因。句子控制在最多5句内。
Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is difficult to read. Typing is also faster for me, so I can finish tasks more quickly. Therefore, I usually choose to type when I need to write something.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Puntuación: 62.0Sugerencia: 要更直接回答并使用更准确的语法与词汇。避免过多填充词(uh、you know)。给出一句主题句(desktop or laptop),再用1–2句具体场景支持,并用连词使句子流畅。注意时态和主谓一致(例如“we always use typing”应为“we always type”)。
Ejemplo: I usually type on a laptop every day because I carry it to classes and use it for notes. I also use it to chat with friends and complete assignments, so the laptop is my main device for typing.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答要更清晰地说明时间或过程,避免口语杂音与重复。可以用简单过去或现在完成时说明何时开始,然后解释通过练习逐渐提高,使用连词如“because”或“so”。控制句数并注意语法(e.g. “the more you type, the more fluent you become”)。
Ejemplo: I didn't have formal lessons; I learned to type gradually during school. Because I typed a lot for homework and chatting, I improved over time — the more I practiced, the faster and more accurate I became.
How do you improve your typing?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答要具体说明改进方法,给出可操作的细节而不是泛泛而谈。可以提到具体练习方式(如在线打字练习、设置打字目标、练习盲打)并用连词连接原因与结果。注意语法与用词(e.g. “writing essays”而不是“right assets”)。
Ejemplo: I improve my typing mainly by practice: I use online typing exercises to increase speed and accuracy, set daily targets for words per minute, and try to practice touch-typing when writing essays or messages.
× My handwriting is a bit of terrible so I would like to type in rather than handwriting to let the others know what I mean.
✓ My handwriting is a bit terrible, so I would rather type than handwrite to let others know what I mean.
句子中“a bit of terrible”用法不正确,形容词前不应加“of”;另外“would like to type in rather than handwriting”中“handwriting”是名词,應用動詞形式“handwrite”,且“would rather”比“would like to ... rather”更自然。建议把“a bit of terrible”改为“a bit terrible”,把“handwriting”改为动词“handwrite”,并去掉不必要的“in”和“the”。
× And also through typing I can write more faster so I will.
✓ Also, by typing I can write faster, so I will.
“more faster”是重复比较(双重比较),正确用法为单一比较形式“faster”。此外“through typing”位置可以更自然地放在句首或用“by typing”。建议去掉“more”,并把状语位置调整为“by typing”或句首。
× I think typing typing is better for me.
✓ I think typing is better for me.
句子中有重复“typing typing”,属于结构冗余与笔误,应删除重复词以使句子通顺。建议检查口语中重复填充词并删去多余部分。
× Yes, honestly, uh, for our university students it, it is hard to avoid uh, typing on a laptop every day.
✓ Yes, honestly, for university students it is hard to avoid typing on a laptop every day.
原句中“for our university students it, it is”存在多余代词和重复“it”,以及口语填充词过多。主谓一致本身无大问题,但需删去重复部分以符合书面表达。建议简化为“for university students it is hard to avoid typing…”并删除多余停顿词。
× Uh, so in our everyday life, always use typing to chat with the others or we just finish our homework or we just doing our own students work.
✓ In our everyday life, we always use typing to chat with others, finish our homework, or do our schoolwork.
原句缺少主语和正确的动词形式(“always use typing”前应有主语“we”;“we just doing”应为“we just do”或“we are just doing”),并且“our own students work”表达不自然,应改为“our schoolwork”。建议补全主语,调整动词时态为简单现在以匹配习惯性动作,并使用更自然的名词短语。
× Well, actually I didn't learn how to type on my keyboard.
✓ Well, actually I didn't learn how to type on a keyboard.
“on my keyboard”并非严重错误,但更自然的表达是“on a keyboard”;另外若想强调过去过程可用过去时“didn't learn”,句子本身时态正确。建议把“my keyboard”改为更一般的“a keyboard”以匹配后文描述的普遍经历。
× I would, I would like to say it is a, a learning by do by doing because when you are typing the more and you are become more in uh, fluent.
✓ I would like to say it is learning by doing because the more you type, the more fluent you become.
原句结构混乱,存在重复“I would, I would”与错误短语“learning by do by doing”。比较结构“the more... the more...”未正确完成。建议使用固定短语“learning by doing”,并把比较结构改为“the more you type, the more fluent you become”。
× So it is a practice as a period, yeah.
✓ So it is a period of practice.
原句“a practice as a period”语序和搭配不正确,应改为“a period of practice”或更自然“a practice process”。建议使用正确名词短语“a period of practice”。
× Well as I mentioned before it is a learning by doing a process.
✓ Well, as I mentioned before, it is a learning-by-doing process.
“learning by doing”是固定搭配,作为复合形容词修饰“process”时通常写作“learning-by-doing process”或“a process of learning by doing”。原句多余的“a”使用不当。建议使用连字符或改写为“a process of learning by doing”。
× So when you are doing more on your chatting and right assets your your typing will be improved.
✓ So when you chat more and write more, your typing will improve.
原句存在词汇和结构错误:“doing more on your chatting and right assets”不通,“right assets”可能是“write”打错或误说。重复“your your”。建议用简洁的并列动词短语“chat more and write more”,并用简单现在“will improve”或直接“improve”表示结果。