Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I prefer typing to handwriting because typing helps me real time to finish the work and so I can do a lot of things and typing. Help me.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Yes, I try on laptop every day because I use it to do work and to study English every day is have high temperature. When I study English I use laptop to look for the care.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
Well, I learned how to tie on a keyboard screen. I was charged My father bought a computer to for working, so I often I used to type.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
I often type my e-mail or my exercise on the keyboard to improve my typing. For example, when I to work I often do computer.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và mạch lạc; tránh câu rời rạc và lỗi ngữ pháp. Nên có một câu chủ đề nêu ý chính, sau đó thêm 1–2 câu giải thích cụ thể (lý do và ví dụ). Dùng liên từ phù hợp để nối ý (for example, because, so). Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như “helps me finish my work in real time” và loại bỏ phần thừa như “Help me.”
Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it helps me finish my work more quickly. For example, typing allows me to edit and format documents easily, so I can complete tasks and send them immediately.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Cần câu trả lời ngắn gọn, đúng ngữ pháp và rõ ràng. Tránh câu bị lẫn ý hoặc thông tin không liên quan (ví dụ “is have high temperature”). Nên trả lời trực tiếp (desktop or laptop), giải thích vì sao, và cho một ví dụ cụ thể. Dùng linking words như “because” hoặc “for example”.
Ejemplo: I use a laptop every day because it’s portable and convenient for both work and studying English. For example, I often search for learning materials online and take notes on my laptop.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: Cần nói rõ mốc thời gian và diễn đạt chính xác bằng ngữ pháp đúng (learned how to type). Tránh lỗi chính tả như “tie” thay vì “type” và câu rời rạc. Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề xác định thời gian, sau đó giải thích hoàn cảnh và nêu ví dụ về cách bạn học (ví dụ: tự học, lớp học hoặc bố mẹ hướng dẫn).
Ejemplo: I learned how to type when I was a child after my father bought a computer. He showed me the basics, and I practised by typing simple documents and emails until I became faster.
How do you improve your typing?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: Cần mô tả phương pháp cải thiện cụ thể và tránh câu trùng lặp. Nên sử dụng liên từ để nối các ý và cung cấp ví dụ rõ ràng về bài tập hoặc công cụ bạn dùng (ví dụ: luyện gõ với phần mềm, bài tập đánh máy, thời lượng luyện tập mỗi ngày).
Ejemplo: I improve my typing by practising daily: I write emails and complete typing exercises for about 20 minutes each day. For example, I use online typing tests to track my speed and accuracy and focus on the keys I find difficult.
× I prefer typing to handwriting because typing helps me real time to finish the work and so I can do a lot of things and typing. Help me.
✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because typing helps me to finish work in real time, so I can do a lot of things with typing that help me.
The sentence misuses '-ing' phrases and has fragmented clauses. Use 'helps me to finish' or 'helps me finish' (verb + to-infinitive or bare infinitive after 'help'). 'Real time' should be 'in real time' (preposition). Combine fragments into one coherent sentence and use 'with typing' to show instrument. Suggestion: simplify clauses and connect them with conjunctions. Grammar problem type ID: 8
× Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
✓ Do you type on a desktop or a laptop keyboard every day?
When offering two alternatives, include the article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard' to parallel 'a desktop'. This ensures consistent noun phrase structure. Suggestion: keep articles parallel in lists. Grammar problem type ID: 22
× Yes, I try on laptop every day because I use it to do work and to study English every day is have high temperature.
✓ Yes, I use a laptop every day because I use it to work and to study English; sometimes it gets very hot.
Original mixes verb forms and has an ungrammatical clause 'is have high temperature.' Use simple present for habitual actions ('use a laptop every day'). Describe the laptop overheating with 'it gets very hot.' Also add article 'a' before 'laptop' and improve sentence flow. Grammar problem type ID: 6
× When I study English I use laptop to look for the care.
✓ When I study English I use my laptop to look for information about the course.
Missing possessive 'my' and incorrect preposition/word choice 'look for the care.' Likely intended 'look for information about the course' or 'look up materials.' Use 'use my laptop' and correct object/prepositional phrase. Suggestion: be specific about what you search for and use correct collocations like 'look for information' or 'look up materials.' Grammar problem type ID: 11
× Well, I learned how to tie on a keyboard screen. I was charged My father bought a computer to for working, so I often I used to type.
✓ Well, I learned how to type on a keyboard when my father bought a computer for work, so I often used it to practice typing.
Multiple problems: 'tie' should be 'type' (spelling). 'On a keyboard screen' is incorrect; say 'on a keyboard.' 'I was charged' is irrelevant/confusing and likely incorrect; remove it. Use past simple for completed past actions ('my father bought', 'I learned', 'I often used it'). 'Used to' plus base verb is for past habitual actions: 'I often used it to practice typing.' Suggestion: use past simple consistently and correct word choice. Grammar problem type ID: 5
× How do you improve your typing?
✓ How do you improve your typing?
This question sentence is correct. No preposition or grammatical error detected; no change needed. Keep as is. Grammar problem type ID: 11
× I often type my e-mail or my exercise on the keyboard to improve my typing. For example, when I to work I often do computer.
✓ I often type emails or exercises on the keyboard to improve my typing. For example, when I work I often use the computer.
Original has awkward collocations and missing verbs: 'my e-mail or my exercise' should be plural 'emails or exercises.' The second sentence has 'when I to work' which is ungrammatical; use 'when I work' and 'use the computer.' Suggestion: use proper verb forms and standard collocations like 'use the computer' and plural nouns when speaking generally. Grammar problem type ID: 26