Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答直接清晰，先表达偏好，再给出两个理由，结构自然。可以使用连接词“because”或“also”让两个理由衔接得更顺畅；“so it feels more comfortable”可以改为更自然的“which makes the journey more comfortable”。此外，可以加入一个具体场景或结果，使答案更丰富，但仍应控制在2至3句话内。

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. I prefer a window seat because I can enjoy the scenery and watch the landscape change during the journey. Also, if I feel sleepy, I can lean against the window, which makes the trip more comfortable.

Sugerencia: 答案有具体地点、人物和难忘经历，内容方向很好，但存在明显的语法错误和表达中断。“there was I have a rainstorm”应改为“we experienced a heavy rainstorm”或“there was a heavy rainstorm”；“had each held”应改为一般过去时“each held”；“reached my belly”可以改为更自然的“came up to my waist”或“was waist-deep”。最后一句没有完成，应明确说明这次经历的感受，例如“It was frightening but unforgettable.”建议使用“because”“while”和“as a result”等连接词，使故事更连贯。

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. When I was little, I went to Shanghai with my parents, and we experienced a heavy rainstorm there. The water on the street came up to my waist, so my parents each held one of my arms as we walked through it. It was frightening, but it is still one of my most unforgettable childhood memories.

× What made the greatest impression on me was that there was I have a rainstorm and the water on the street reached my belly.

✓ What made the greatest impression on me was that there was a rainstorm, and the water on the street reached my belly.

“There was”后面应该接名词短语。这里应使用“a rainstorm”，不能说“there was I have a rainstorm”。“There was a rainstorm”表示“发生了一场暴雨”。建议掌握“There was/were + 名词”的结构：单数名词用“There was”，复数名词用“There were”。

× What made the greatest impression on me was that there was I have a rainstorm and the water on the street reached my belly.

✓ What made the greatest impression on me was that there was a rainstorm, and the water on the street reached my belly.

这个故事讲的是童年时发生的事情，应该使用过去时。“I have”是现在时，而且在这个句子中结构也不正确。改为“There was a rainstorm”后，整句话的时态与“made”和“reached”保持一致。建议叙述过去经历时，统一使用一般过去时。

× My parents had each held one of my arms and we walked through it together.

✓ My parents each held one of my arms, and we walked through it together.

这里是在按时间顺序叙述过去发生的动作，不需要使用过去完成时“had held”。使用一般过去时“held”即可。过去完成时通常用于表示一个过去动作发生在另一个过去动作之前。建议先判断是否需要强调“过去的过去”；如果只是连续叙述事件，就使用一般过去时。

× It was.

✓ It was an unforgettable experience.

“It was”后面缺少补充信息，句子意思不完整。需要在系动词“was”后面补充表语，例如名词短语“an unforgettable experience”。建议检查系动词后是否有完整的表语，以避免句子结构不完整。