Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答切题，也给出了多个理由，但句子过长，连接词重复使用了多次“and also”。注意语法：应说“sit by the window”“like a quiet place”“relax”“ignore other people’s conversations/noise”和“take pictures of beautiful scenery”。建议先直接回答偏好，再用“because”和“Besides”分别补充两个具体理由，使表达更自然、清晰。

Ejemplo: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when I travel. I enjoy having a quiet space where I can relax and avoid unnecessary noise from other passengers. Besides, I can take pictures of the beautiful scenery outside, which makes the journey more enjoyable.

Sugerencia: 回答包含了否定回答、原因和相关经历，内容比较完整，但时态和句子结构需要改进。“had never had a chance”在这里不自然，直接说“I didn’t have many chances”即可；“my parents are not being with me”应改为“my parents weren’t with me”；“My grandparents as my companion”应改为“My grandparents accompanied me”或“My grandparents were my companions”。建议用过去时保持一致，并具体说明旅行带来的收获。

Ejemplo: No, I didn’t have many long journeys with my parents because they weren’t often with me when I was a child. Instead, my grandparents accompanied me on trips to different places. I really enjoyed those journeys because they gave me the chance to see new things and spend quality time with them.

× Well, I prefer to sit by the windows when I'm traveling because I like to quiet place and relax myself and also can ignore other people's bosen, and also I could take some pictures with beautiful set scenes and feel better.

✓ Well, I prefer to sit by the window when I'm traveling because I like to quiet place and relax myself and also can ignore other people's bosen, and also I could take some pictures with beautiful set scenes and feel better.

这里谈的是坐在窗户旁边这一类位置，通常使用单数形式 “the window”。“the windows”表示多个特定的窗户，在此语境中不自然。

× Well, I prefer to sit by the windows when I'm traveling because I like to quiet place and relax myself and also can ignore other people's bosen, and also I could take some pictures with beautiful set scenes and feel better.

✓ Well, I prefer to sit by the windows when I'm traveling because I like a quiet place and relax myself and also can ignore other people's bosen, and also I could take some pictures with beautiful set scenes and feel better.

可数名词单数 “place” 前面需要冠词。这里表示“一个安静的地方”，所以应使用不定冠词 “a”：a quiet place。

× Well, I prefer to sit by the windows when I'm traveling because I like to quiet place and relax myself and also can ignore other people's bosen, and also I could take some pictures with beautiful set scenes and feel better.

✓ Well, I prefer to sit by the windows when I'm traveling because I like to quiet place and relax and also can ignore other people's bosen, and also I could take some pictures with beautiful set scenes and feel better.

“relax”本身就是不及物动词，表示“放松”，通常不需要反身代词。因此应说 “relax”，而不是 “relax myself”。只有在强调“使自己放松”时，才可以使用 “relax myself”。

× Well, I prefer to sit by the windows when I'm traveling because I like to quiet place and relax myself and also can ignore other people's bosen, and also I could take some pictures with beautiful set scenes and feel better.

✓ Well, I prefer to sit by the windows when I'm traveling because I like to quiet place and relax and I can also ignore other people's bosen, and I could also take some pictures with beautiful set scenes and feel better.

“can ignore”前缺少主语，导致句子结构不完整。应补充主语 “I”，改为 “I can also ignore”。并列结构中要保持主语和谓语关系清晰。

× No, I had never had a chance to spend a long journey with my parents because my parents are not being with me when I was a kid.

✓ No, I never had a chance to spend a long journey with my parents because my parents were not with me when I was a kid.

“when I was a kid”明确表示过去时间，因此主句中的 “are not being”不能使用现在时。应改为过去时 “were not”。在回答过去经历时，“I never had”比 “I had never had”更自然。

× My grandparents as my compion, they took me to different places.

✓ My grandparents were my companions, and they took me to different places.

“grandparents”是复数，所以表示“陪伴者”的名词也应使用复数形式 “companions”，不能使用单数 “companion”。

× My grandparents as my compion, they took me to different places.

✓ My grandparents were my companions, and they took me to different places.

原句使用了不完整的结构 “My grandparents as my companion”，并且后面重复使用了主语 “they”。应使用完整的系表结构 “My grandparents were my companions”，再用 “and” 连接后面的分句。

× I think this is a good experience too.

✓ I think this was a good experience too.

这里谈论的是童年时已经发生的经历，因此应使用过去时 “was”，而不是现在时 “is”。主句 “I think” 可以保留现在时，因为这是说话者现在的看法。