Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer directly in the present tense because the question asks about your current preference. Avoid repeating “window” and “outside,” and use natural phrases such as “look out of the window” and “watch the scenery go by.” Add one clear reason and use a linking word to connect your ideas. Also, divide the response into two or three sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I usually choose a window seat because I enjoy looking out at the scenery, especially the trees, cars, and people outside. It also makes long journeys more interesting and relaxing.

Sugerencia: Give a complete answer with a clear time reference, destination, and purpose. Use the past tense consistently: “travelled,” not “travel,” and replace the unclear phrase “to migrant mother” with the intended meaning, such as “to visit my mother.” Organize the answer into short sentences and add one specific detail about the journey or how you felt.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child, my family and I travelled to the countryside to visit my mother. It was a long journey by car, but I enjoyed seeing the beautiful scenery along the way.

× Yes I do When I was travelling I would like to sit near the window so I can see the picture outside the trees, the people, the car and everything I enjoy looking outside of the window.

✓ Yes, I do. When I travel, I like to sit near the window so I can see the scenery outside—the trees, people, cars, and everything else. I enjoy looking out of the window.

The question asks about a general preference, so the present tense is more appropriate: travel and like. The original answer changes from the present tense to the past expression when I was travelling and then returns to the present with can. Keep the tense consistent when describing a regular preference.

× Yes I do When I was travelling I would like to sit near the window so I can see the picture outside the trees, the people, the car and everything I enjoy looking outside of the window.

✓ Yes, I do. When I travel, I like to sit near the window so I can see the scenery outside—the trees, people, cars, and everything else. I enjoy looking out of the window.

The natural preposition is out of in the expression look out of the window. Looking outside of the window is understandable, but it is less natural in this context. Use common fixed expressions such as look out of the window.

× Yes I do When I was travelling I would like to sit near the window so I can see the picture outside the trees, the people, the car and everything I enjoy looking outside of the window.

✓ Yes, I do. When I travel, I like to sit near the window so I can see the scenery outside—the trees, people, cars, and everything else. I enjoy looking out of the window.

The original response contains several ideas joined without clear sentence boundaries. Separate the answer into complete sentences and use a clear list structure. This makes the response easier to understand and avoids a run-on sentence.

× Yes, I did have a long journey with my family first time before I remember we travel to the countryside to migrant mother.

✓ Yes, I did. I remember that the first time I travelled to the countryside with my family was to visit my mother.

Because the question asks about a journey in the past, the verb travel should be in the past tense: travelled. Use the past tense consistently when describing a childhood experience.

× Yes, I did have a long journey with my family first time before I remember we travel to the countryside to migrant mother.

✓ Yes, I did. I remember that the first time I travelled to the countryside with my family was to visit my mother.

The phrase first time needs the definite article the because it refers to a specific first occasion. The correct expression is the first time.

× Yes, I did have a long journey with my family first time before I remember we travel to the countryside to migrant mother.

✓ Yes, I did. I remember that the first time I travelled to the countryside with my family was to visit my mother.

The original sentence combines several incomplete and unclear phrases. Use separate sentences and the structure I remember that the first time ... was to ... to express the meaning clearly. Also, use a complete verb phrase, such as to visit my mother.