Travelling— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer to sit by the window when travelling?
Candidato
Yes, I prefer to sit by the window because I can enjoy beautiful scenery during the journey. For example, when I travel by bus through the countryside, I like watching the rolling hills and small villages pass by, which helps me relax and take photos.
Examinador
Did you have a long journey with your family as a child?
Candidato
When I was a child my family and I visited various places such as seaside and Song Music We often traveled long distance because my parents wanted to broaden my horizons and make life more interesting.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Do you prefer to sit by the window when travelling?
Puntuación: 90.0Sugerencia: 回答直接、结构清晰，先表达偏好，再用 because 说明原因，并通过 For example 提供具体场景。词汇如 beautiful scenery、rolling hills 和 countryside 较准确自然。可以将“during the journey”替换为更简洁的“on the way”，并补充一个简单结果，使表达更加口语化，但注意不要超过5句话。
Ejemplo: Yes, I definitely prefer a window seat because I enjoy looking at the scenery on the way. For instance, when I travel through the countryside by bus, I can watch the rolling hills and small villages, which helps me relax and take a few photos.
Did you have a long journey with your family as a child?
Puntuación: 58.0Sugerencia: 回答没有先明确回答“是”或“否”，建议开头直接说“Yes, we did”。“such as seaside and Song Music”表达不清，且 seaside 前需要冠词，Song Music 可能是地点名称，应该明确说明是什么地方。“traveled long distance”应改为“travelled long distances”或“went on long trips”。建议使用清晰的连接词，并提供一个具体地点或旅行经历来支持“开阔眼界”这一原因。
Ejemplo: Yes, we did. When I was a child, my family often went on long trips to places such as the seaside and Songshan Mountain. My parents wanted to broaden my horizons, and I especially remember enjoying the beautiful scenery and trying local food.
Gramática
× When I was a child my family and I visited various places such as seaside and Song Music We often traveled long distance because my parents wanted to broaden my horizons and make life more interesting.
✓ When I was a child, my family and I visited various places such as the seaside and Song Music. We often traveled long distances because my parents wanted to broaden my horizons and make life more interesting.
“Distance”在这里表示多次或较长的旅程距离，通常使用复数形式“distances”。因此，“travel long distance”应改为“travel long distances”。建议注意：当名词表示多个距离、地点或事物时，要使用复数形式。
× When I was a child my family and I visited various places such as seaside and Song Music We often traveled long distance because my parents wanted to broaden my horizons and make life more interesting.
✓ When I was a child, my family and I visited various places such as the seaside and Song Music. We often traveled long distances because my parents wanted to broaden my horizons and make life more interesting.
“Seaside”表示海边这一特定地点或环境时，通常要在前面加定冠词“the”，所以应说“the seaside”，不能说“seaside”。建议记住一些表示自然环境或特定地点的名词常与“the”连用，例如“the seaside”“the countryside”和“the beach”。
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