Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and direct. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and unrelated statements (for example, 'I prefer to always stay at home' contradicts your love of travel). Focus on relevant details such as what you enjoy seeing from the window and how it makes you feel.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually prefer a window seat when I travel. For example, I enjoy watching landscapes and city views because they relax me and make long journeys more interesting. Also, having a window helps me take photos and keeps me comfortable during the trip.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give specific supporting details with clear linking words. State whether you had such journeys, then explain two concise reasons (e.g. family attitudes and financial reasons). Avoid vague phrasing and grammatical errors; use simple past or past continuous correctly when referring to childhood experiences.

Ejemplo: No, I didn't have many long journeys with my family as a child. Mainly because my parents preferred to stay close to home, and also we couldn't afford long trips at that time. As a result, most of my childhood holidays were short visits to nearby relatives.

× Yes, I love to travel I have to prefer to see it by the window when travelling I have a lot of experience in travelling and also I have I had tried to see it next to the window because it's very eye soothing towards the nature and I prefer to always stay at home.

✓ Yes, I love to travel. I prefer to sit by the window when travelling. I have a lot of experience travelling, and I have tried to sit next to the window because the view of nature is very soothing. However, I also prefer to stay at home at times.

Multiple present-tense and phrasing issues: 'I have to prefer' is incorrect for expressing preference; use simple present 'I prefer'. Unnecessary present perfect or mixed forms 'I have I had tried' should be simplified to 'I have tried'. 'See it by the window' is awkward; use 'sit by the window' or 'sit next to the window'. 'Eye soothing towards the nature' is incorrect adjective/adverb order and preposition use; use 'soothing' and 'the view of nature' or 'soothing to the eyes'. Finally, run-on sentences need splitting into shorter sentences. Suggestion: use consistent simple present for habitual preferences, correct collocations (prefer to sit, sit next to the window, view of nature), and remove redundant words.

× No, I don't have any memory of a long journey with my family as a child because my family is very conservative and they didn't want it to travel as much as they can instead they also have money problems so they cannot travel so much in that situation.

✓ No, I don't have any memory of a long journey with my family as a child because my family was very conservative and they did not want to travel much. They also had money problems, so they could not travel often.

Mixed tense and incorrect verb usage: 'my family is very conservative' should use past tense 'was' when referring to childhood. 'They didn't want it to travel' is ungrammatical: remove 'it' and use 'did not want to travel'. 'As much as they can' conflicts with past timeframe; use 'much' or 'often'. 'Cannot travel so much in that situation' should be past 'could not travel often'. Suggestion: maintain past tense consistently when describing childhood circumstances, remove extraneous pronouns, and use natural adverbs like 'much' or 'often'.