Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答要更自然、结构更清晰，并修正词汇和语法错误。开头一句直接回答问题，然后用一到两句具体理由支持，并用连接词衔接。避免模糊或错误的短语（例如 “enjoy the wheels” 应改为 “enjoy the view” 或 “watch the scenery”）。句子不宜过长，控制在最多五句内。

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually prefer the window seat when I travel. I enjoy watching the scenery pass by, especially when I’m on a bus, boat or plane, because it makes the journey more relaxing. Also, having a window gives me something to focus on if I want to rest or take photos.

Sugerencia: 回答需要更符合时态和语法，注意主语和动词的一致性（例如用 “My family and I went to…” 而不是 “me and my family have been to…”）。先给出直接答案，再用一到两句具体细节说明行程和感受，使用连接词使逻辑更清楚。避免重复之前的内容，提供新的具体细节（比如旅行时长、难忘的经历或喜欢的活动）。

Ejemplo: Yes, my family and I took several long trips when I was a child, including visits to Korea and Taiwan. Those journeys usually lasted about a week or more, and I remember enjoying looking out the window and trying local foods during stops, which made the trips memorable.

× Yes, I like to sit by the window when travelling, especially riding on a bus, boat or a plane.

✓ Yes, I like to sit by the window when travelling, especially when riding on a bus, a boat, or a plane.

句子中“especially riding on a bus, boat or a plane”缺少连接词使结构不完整，应该加上“when”来引导时间状语；另外列举名词时每一项前可加冠词以更自然。建议在类似场合用“especially when + 动名词/现在分词”或直接列举交通工具并在必要处加冠词。

× I like to sit by the window because I enjoy the wheels during travelling on the transport it's a very nice view.

✓ I like to sit by the window because I enjoy the views while travelling on transport; it's a very nice sight.

原句中“enjoy the wheels”用词不当（wheels 表示车轮），应为“views”或“the view”；此外句子由两个独立分句直接相连，应使用分号、连接词或分句改写以避免run-on sentence（句子连写错误）。建议把“during travelling on the transport”改为更自然的“while travelling”或“when travelling on transport”。

× Yes, me and my family have been to Korea and Taiwan for me it's quite a bit long journey and I enjoy travelling on the transports.

✓ Yes, my family and I have been to Korea and Taiwan. For me, those were rather long journeys, and I enjoy travelling by different kinds of transport.

“me and my family”为非标准主格顺序且代词格错误，应为“my family and I”。原句中“for me it's quite a bit long journey”在数与结构上不正确：提到多个目的地应使用复数“journeys”或重写为“those were rather long journeys”；“on the transports”不自然，常用“by transport”或“by bus/plane/boat”或“different kinds of transport”。建议按主格顺序排列人称代词，并注意单复数一致与介词搭配。

× As I mentioned, I like to view during the travel

✓ As I mentioned, I like to look at the view during travel.

“like to view”用法不自然，动词“view”通常需要宾语且在口语中更常用“look at the view”或“enjoy the view”；“during the travel”也不太地道，通常说“during travel”或“while travelling”。建议使用常见搭配“enjoy the view”或“look at the view while travelling”。