Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答需更自然、语法更准确，并避免冗长或不清晰的词语。首先主题句要直接（例如：Yes, I prefer the window seat），随后用一到两句具体说明原因并用连接词衔接。注意单数/复数、时态和词汇拼写（例如 ‘window seat’, ‘sometimes’）。整体控制在最多五句内。

Ejemplo: Yes, I prefer the window seat when travelling because I enjoy the view. For example, looking out at the sea or the landscape helps me relax and makes the trip more enjoyable.

Sugerencia: 回答要更自然并包含更多具体细节以丰富内容。用一个简洁的主题句回答（例如：No, I didn't have long family trips as a child），然后说明原因并可以补充短期回忆或结果。注意语法（过去时）和衔接词（because, so, although）。控制在不超过五句。

Ejemplo: No, I didn't have long trips with my family when I was a child because my parents were both very busy with work. As a result, we mostly stayed local and I have few memories of long-distance travel with them.

× Yes, I like sea bilater windows when sometimes I'm travelling.

✓ Yes, I like window seats by the sea when I travel sometimes.

错误类型：形容词/副词使用不当。原句中“sea bilater windows”词序和词语选择都不正确。应该使用固定短语“window seat”（靠窗座位）或表达“windows by the sea/sea-view windows”（靠海的窗户/海景窗）视情境而定；另，“when sometimes I'm travelling”词序不自然，应改为“when I travel sometimes”或更自然地放在句末“I travel sometimes”。建议：使用常见搭配（window seat, sea-view）并把频率/时间状语放在更自然的位置。

× Since I think when I look at the outside the beautiful thing was appealing to me.

✓ I think that when I look outside, beautiful things appeal to me.

错误类型：现在时态使用不当。句中含有现在时的想法“Since I think…when I look…”，但却用了过去时“was appealing”，时态不一致。应将“was appealing”改为一般现在时“appeal”以与主句时态一致。另外，短语“look at the outside”不自然，改为“look outside”；“the beautiful thing”也应改为复数或更自然的表达“beautiful things”。建议：保持句子时态一致，使用自然搭配。

× No, since my parents were busy working so I have no chance to have a long journey with them.

✓ No, because my parents were busy working, so I didn't have a chance to go on a long journey with them.

错误类型：过去时使用不当。句首使用过去时“were busy working”，但后半句用的是现在时“have no chance”，应该全部用过去时来描述过去的情况，因而将“have no chance”改为过去式“didn't have a chance”，并把“不定式搭配”调整为更自然的“go on a long journey”。此外，用连词“because”比“since”更清晰。建议：讲述过去经历时，保持动词时态一致并使用常见固定搭配（go on a journey）。