Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer more concise and correct grammar, organize into a clear topic sentence plus one or two supporting details, and use linking words for coherence. Avoid repetition (e.g. "train or high speed rail", "feeling more about in the travel"). Be specific about what you enjoy (e.g. landscapes, city views) and give one short reason and one example. Watch verb forms and article usage ("a window seat", "makes me feel").

Ejemplo: I usually choose a window seat when I travel because I enjoy watching the landscape pass by. For example, on trains I like seeing fields and rivers, and on planes I enjoy cloud formations, which makes the journey more relaxing. Also, I often take photos from the window to remember the trip.

Sugerencia: Improve verb tense consistency and clarity: start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific supporting details with linking words. Correct noun phrases ("the United States", "national parks") and verbs ("visited", "made"). Be specific about places and what made the memory memorable (e.g. viewpoint, panorama, family activities). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes. When I was a child my family and I spent about two weeks in the United States, mainly visiting California and some national parks. We climbed to a high viewpoint and saw a stunning panoramic view, which made the trip unforgettable. I also remember sharing meals and photographs with my family, which strengthened those memories.

× Yes, I always choose seat on the high speed rail or plan with the window seat because I like seeing the scene passing by when the train or high speed rail moving and I also like taking pictures of the window scene because it's really beautiful and also can makes me feeling more about in the travel and.

✓ Yes, I always choose a seat on the high-speed rail or plane by the window because I like seeing the scenery pass by when the train or high-speed rail is moving, and I also like taking pictures of the view from the window because it's really beautiful and makes me feel more immersed in the trip.

Errors: missing articles ('a seat', 'a plane'), incorrect noun form ('high speed rail' -> 'high-speed rail'), incorrect noun 'scene' -> 'scenery' or 'view', missing auxiliary verb and incorrect verb form ('is moving'), unnecessary modal structure and incorrect verb form ('can makes me feeling' -> 'makes me feel'), awkward preposition and phrasing ('more about in the travel' -> 'more immersed in the trip'). Suggestions: add the indefinite article before singular count nouns, hyphenate compound modifiers like 'high-speed', use 'scenery' or 'view' for landscape, use auxiliary verbs for continuous tenses, use base verb after makes (makes me feel), and prefer 'immersed in the trip' for natural expression.

× Yes, when I was a child, I went to United States with my family for about two weeks and we visit places like California and use main National Park, and I remember climbing up to a viewpoint up there and seeing a really beautiful panorama scene, which make that trip very memorable for me.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I went to the United States with my family for about two weeks, and we visited places like California and some national parks. I remember climbing up to a viewpoint there and seeing a really beautiful panoramic scene, which made that trip very memorable for me.

Errors: missing article before 'United States' ('the United States'), incorrect verb tense for repeated past actions ('visit' -> 'visited'), incorrect word choice and pluralization ('use main National Park' unclear -> 'some national parks'), redundant 'up' in 'up to a viewpoint up there', adjective form ('panoramic' instead of 'panorama'), incorrect verb agreement in past ('make' -> 'made'). Suggestions: use past tense consistently for past events, include definite article for country name 'the United States', use correct adjective forms, remove redundancies, and ensure past verb agreement.