Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct minor grammar (e.g., "scenery" singular, remove duplicated phrase "sitting in the sitting by the window"). Aim for 2–4 sentences total.

Ejemplo: Yes — I usually choose a window seat because it feels more relaxing and I enjoy the scenery. For example, when travelling through mountainous areas I can watch the peaks and valleys pass by, which makes the journey more enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear, complete answer: state the trip and give specific details (where, how long, what you liked). Avoid unfinished sentences and unclear terms (e.g., "IBS state" is confusing). Use linking words to organize details and finish your thought. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often took a long journey with my family to our village when I was a child. We travelled there every December and the trip usually took several hours by bus, but I enjoyed it because I could chat with relatives and admire the countryside scenery.

× Yes, I prefer sitting by the window when traveling because I love the atmosphere, I love the sceneries, I love the views and it's more relaxing and comfortable.

✓ Yes, I prefer sitting by the window when traveling because I love the atmosphere, the scenery, the views, and it is more relaxing and comfortable.

Use of noun forms: 'sceneries' is uncountable and should be 'scenery'. Also replace contraction 'it's' with 'it is' optional for formality; commas and conjunctions were adjusted for clarity. Keep 'prefer sitting' is acceptable (prefer + -ing). Suggestion: use 'scenery' and join items with commas and 'and'. Grammar problem type ID:8

× For example, I love mountains, so sitting in the sitting by the window I would see the mountains clearly.

✓ For example, I love mountains, so by sitting by the window I can see the mountains clearly.

Redundant phrase 'sitting in the sitting' is incorrect; structure 'by sitting by the window' or 'sitting by the window' should be used. Also tense/modal: use 'can' to express ability in present. Suggestion: remove duplication and use 'can see' or 'I would be able to see' if hypothetical. Grammar problem type ID:8

× Yes, I had a long journey with my family as a child when I was travelling to village.

✓ Yes, I had a long journey with my family as a child when I was travelling to the village.

The noun 'village' here needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific village known to speaker. Suggestion: use 'the village' or name the village (e.g., 'to my village'). Grammar problem type ID:22

× Village is a small hometown where you originally come from like IBS state.

✓ A village is a small hometown where your family originally comes from, like IBS state.

Sentence lacks article and has awkward pronoun and verb forms. Use 'A village' and 'your family originally comes from' or 'you originally come from' with proper tense. Also comma before 'like IBS state' clarifies the example. Suggestion: restructure to 'A village is a small hometown where your family originally comes from, such as IBS state.' Grammar problem type ID:26

× So we do travel there every December and it's quite a long journey.

✓ So we travel there every December, and it is quite a long journey.

Present simple 'we travel' is preferred; 'do travel' is emphatic and unnecessary here. Use comma before conjunction for clarity and expand contraction 'it's' to 'it is' optionally. Suggestion: use 'we travel' for neutral statement. Grammar problem type ID:26

× We quite a long journey and I enjoy every bit of it because.

✓ We had quite a long journey, and I enjoyed every bit of it.

Original sentence is missing verb ('had') and ends with an unfinished clause 'because'. Correct to past tense to match earlier 'had' and remove the incomplete 'because'. Suggestion: finish thoughts and ensure verbs are present: 'We had quite a long journey, and I enjoyed every bit of it.' Grammar problem type ID:26}]} (Note: Grammar problem type ID lines included in explanation strings for clarity.)