Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid vague phrases and repetition. For example, correct verb forms and pluralization, and replace repetition like “I think” with a single, confident statement.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually prefer to sit by the window. Firstly, I enjoy looking at the changing landscape because it helps me relax and feel connected to the place I’m visiting. For instance, on train trips I like watching rural scenery and mountains pass by, which makes the journey more memorable.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer and then add one or two specific memories or details. Use correct tense and clearer sentence structures. Replace vague fragments with concrete examples (where, how long, what you did). Use linking words like ‘however’ or ‘but’ to contrast memory limitations with what you do recall.

Ejemplo: Yes, we did take a long family trip when I was a child, although I don’t remember everything clearly. However, I clearly recall visiting several coastal towns over two weeks and spending afternoons on the beach collecting shells and trying local food, which made the trip very enjoyable.

× Yeah, I think that is one of the favorite thing of travelling.

✓ Yeah, I think that is one of the favorite things of travelling.

The noun 'thing' should be plural ('things') because the phrase 'one of the' refers to one item from a group of items. Use plural after 'one of the'. Also 'of travelling' is acceptable but consider 'about travelling' for naturalness.

× To me, it is very important to see the landscape in the process because I think that is the point of the travel.

✓ To me, it is very important to see the landscape during the journey because I think that is the point of travel.

The phrase 'in the process' is unnatural here; 'during the journey' fits better. 'The travel' is uncountable in this context, so 'travel' (without 'the') is more natural. Also 'the landscape' is acceptable if referring generally; wording adjusted for clarity and register.

× Yes, I think we had a journey, but I don't remember it very well.

✓ Yes, I think we had a journey, but I don't remember it very well.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable. No change needed. Tense usage (past) is correct for a childhood memory. Keep as is.

× Complete so I just remember that we travel to a lot of way and in different place we enjoy a lot of.

✓ In short, I only remember that we travelled a lot and enjoyed visiting different places.

The original has several problems: 'Complete so' is incorrect—'in short' or 'to be brief' works. 'I just remember' is fine but 'only' is slightly better. 'We travel to a lot of way' is ungrammatical: use past tense 'travelled' for a past memory and 'a lot' should modify 'travelled' (we travelled a lot). 'In different place' should be plural 'different places'. 'We enjoy a lot of' is incomplete; specify 'enjoyed visiting different places' to complete the idea. Overall fix: correct tense agreement, plural nouns, and clearer structure.