Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and natural, but it's slightly repetitive (use of "definitely" twice and similar ideas). To improve, start with a concise topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Vary vocabulary (e.g., use "view" or "landscape") and avoid repeating the same word. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when I travel. For example, I like watching changing landscapes and small towns pass by, which makes the journey more relaxing and interesting.

Sugerencia: The answer addresses the question but is slightly vague and repetitive (phrases like "quite a lot of times", "a lot more", "different new sceneries", and "etc."). Improve by providing one specific example or memory, use precise vocabulary (e.g., "scenery" not "sceneries"), and connect ideas with linking words (for example, "although" or "however"). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often went on long car trips with my family as a child. Although the journeys could be tiring, I remember enjoying watching the countryside and stopping at small villages, which made those trips memorable.

× I definitely prefer to sit by the window while travelling because first of all the ride definitely gets more enjoyable and I enjoy the scenery and looking at the beautiful surroundings while I'm traveling.

✓ I definitely prefer to sit by the window while travelling because, first of all, the ride becomes more enjoyable and I enjoy the scenery and the beautiful surroundings when I'm travelling.

The original sentence mixes synonyms and has redundancy ('gets more enjoyable' and 'definitely' twice). 'Gets' is informal; 'becomes' is clearer in present tense. Use consistent spelling ('travelling') and parallel structure: 'enjoy the scenery and the beautiful surroundings' is clearer than 'enjoy the scenery and looking at...'. Add commas around 'first of all' for clarity.

× Yes, I've had a long journey quite a lot of times with my family as a child and it was very fun.

✓ Yes, I took long journeys with my family many times when I was a child, and they were very fun.

The phrase 'I've had a long journey quite a lot of times with my family as a child' mixes present perfect with a specific past time ('as a child'), which requires simple past. Change to 'I took long journeys' and 'when I was a child'. Also make number agreement: 'journeys' plural and 'they were' to match.

× It was exhausting for sometimes but when we look at the window outside, we definitely enjoy a lot more because we see a lot of different new sceneries and etc.

✓ It was exhausting at times, but when we looked out of the window, we enjoyed the journey more because we saw many different scenes.

Use consistent past tense ('was', 'looked', 'enjoyed', 'saw') because the sentence refers to past experiences. 'For sometimes' is incorrect; use 'at times'. 'Look at the window outside' is awkward; 'looked out of the window' is natural. 'A lot of different new sceneries' is ungrammatical: 'scenery' is uncountable; use 'many different scenes' or 'many new sights'. Avoid 'etc.' in speech; be specific.