Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Keep the answer natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct small grammar errors and avoid redundancy (e.g., "makes me more relaxed and happy" -> combine). Also use a slightly wider range of vocabulary (e.g., "scenery" instead of "landscape or city scape").

Ejemplo: Yes, I prefer the window seat. It helps me relax and I enjoy watching the passing scenery, so I often take photos to remember the trip.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence and correct tense and phrasing. Use linking words to make the sequence clear (e.g., "although", "but then"). Be specific about what made the trip tiring and what you enjoyed afterwards to enrich the answer. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I took a long family trip to Australia when I was a child. Although the flight lasted about seventeen hours and was exhausting, once we arrived I forgot the discomfort and enjoyed exploring the beaches and museums with my family.

× Actually, yes, sitting by the window is my favorite place.

✓ Actually, yes, sitting by the window is my favorite spot.

The original sentence is grammatically acceptable but contains a word choice issue rather than a strict grammar error: 'place' is less natural than 'spot' after 'favorite' when referring to a seat. Keep the -ing gerund 'sitting' because it correctly functions as a noun here. Suggestion: use collocations that sound natural (favorite spot).

× It makes me more relaxed and happy and I like usually do take photos of the landscape or city scape so that I can keep it in my memory.

✓ It makes me feel more relaxed and happy, and I usually like to take photos of the landscape or cityscape so that I can keep them in my memory.

Several issues relate to adverb placement, verb structure, and word choice. 'Like usually do take' has incorrect adverb position and unnecessary auxiliary 'do'. Correct order is 'I usually like to take' or 'I like to take... usually'. Also use 'feel' after 'makes me' to describe emotional effect. 'City scape' should be one word 'cityscape'. Use plural 'them' to refer to 'photos'. Suggestion: place adverbs (usually) before the main verb and avoid redundant auxiliaries; use 'feel' after 'makes me'.

× Yes, it was to Australia.

✓ Yes, it was to Australia.

This sentence is acceptable in context; however, more natural phrasing would be 'Yes, we went to Australia' to clearly indicate the subject and action in past tense. The original uses 'it' vaguely. Suggestion: state the trip subject and use past tense verb 'went'.

× I spent around seventeen hours to arrive there.

✓ I spent around seventeen hours getting there.

Use of infinitive 'to arrive' after 'spent' is incorrect. With 'spend' to express duration, follow with a gerund: 'spent X hours doing something'. Suggestion: use 'getting there' or 'traveling there' after 'spent'.

× It was a tired journey, but when I am there I forgot everything and I started to enjoy every moment there.

✓ It was a tiring journey, but when I was there I forgot everything and started to enjoy every moment.

Multiple tense and word-form errors: 'tired journey' should be 'tiring journey' to describe the journey as causing tiredness (adjective form). 'When I am there' mixes present with past—must use past 'when I was there' to match 'it was'. Also 'I forgot' and 'I started' are fine but keep consistent past simple; second 'there' is redundant. Suggestion: keep past tense consistent and use correct adjective form 'tiring'.