Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve pronunciation and word choice (e.g. "shaning" -> "shining" or better "changing/beautiful"), correct grammar (add articles, plural forms) and avoid minor redundancy. Make the answer more concise and include a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific details using a linking word.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually choose a window seat because I enjoy watching the scenery. For example, on flights I like watching changing landscapes and clouds below, which helps me relax during the journey.

Sugerencia: Correct place names and word forms (e.g. "Siang Mai" -> "Chiang Mai", "temporal" -> "temples", "make memory able" -> "created lasting memories"). Use clearer sentence structure and linking words to connect ideas (e.g. "We stayed for a week and..."), and be specific about activities or foods to enrich content.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. The longest trip was from Bangkok to Chiang Mai in northern Thailand. We stayed for a week, visiting ancient temples and trying local dishes like khao soi, which created wonderful and lasting memories.

× For example, from the window I can see shaning landscape and cloud which make the journey more relaxing.

✓ For example, from the window I can see shining landscapes and clouds which make the journey more relaxing.

The word 'shaning' is a misspelling and should be the adjective 'shining' formed from the verb 'shine' (error type: incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). Also 'landscape' and 'cloud' should be plural ('landscapes', 'clouds') to match the general observation; this is a singular and plural issue (IDs 1 and 13). Suggestion: use 'shining landscapes and clouds' to correctly use the adjective and plural nouns.

× We went to Siang Mai and stayed for a week.

✓ We went to Chiang Mai and stayed for a week.

The place name 'Siang Mai' appears misspelled; correct name is 'Chiang Mai' (this is not strictly a grammar category but correcting proper noun spelling is necessary). No plural error here; sentence is otherwise grammatically correct. Suggestion: use correct place names to avoid confusion.

× We had a wonderful time visiting temporal and trying local foods which make memory able.

✓ We had a wonderful time visiting temples and trying local foods which made memories.

'Temporal' is the wrong word; the correct noun is 'temples' (plural) for religious sites (incorrect word choice, treated as adjective/adverb misuse). 'Which make memory able' is ungrammatical: 'made memories' or 'created lasting memories' is correct. The verb tense should be past ('made') to match 'had' and 'went' earlier. Also change 'memory able' to the noun phrase 'lasting memories' or simply 'memories'. Suggestion: write 'visiting temples and trying local foods which made lasting memories' or 'which created lasting memories'.