Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the response direct, concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one specific reason with a linking word. Avoid fillers and unclear phrases. For example, say you prefer window seats on planes because you enjoy the view and it helps you relax, and contrast briefly if you ever choose otherwise.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually prefer to sit by the window when I travel by plane because I enjoy the view and it helps me relax. However, if I need to get up often or stretch, I sometimes choose an aisle seat for convenience.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, use past tense correctly and provide a specific example to support your statement. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast past and present. Remove hesitations. Mention one memorable trip detail to make the answer more vivid.

Ejemplo: Yes, when I was a child I often went on long journeys with my family. For example, we took a week-long coastal road trip when I was ten, visiting beaches and small towns. However, now I usually travel with my friends because my parents do not have time for long vacations.

× When they travel by plane I always prefer to sit near the window because I love to so to see a view so but when I like it's a boss.

✓ When I travel by plane, I always prefer to sit near the window because I love to see the view, but sometimes I like to sit in the aisle.

The student used 'they' instead of the first-person 'I' (incorrect pronoun) and produced several ungrammatical fragments ('love to so to see a view so', 'when I like it's a boss'). Also, 'it's a boss' is meaningless here. Correction chooses coherent meaning: first-person perspective and clear reasons. Suggestion: use the correct subject pronoun that matches the speaker (I), remove extra filler words, and choose clear phrasing ('love to see the view', 'sometimes I like to sit in the aisle') to convey contrast. Note: This entry addresses pronoun misuse and overall sentence clarity; related subject-verb issues are resolved by using 'I travel' and 'I prefer'.

× When I was a child I had a lot of journey with my family, but now I uh, travel with my friends because my that umm, because my parents haven't got time for vacation.

✓ When I was a child, I took a lot of journeys with my family, but now I travel with my friends because my parents don't have time for vacations.

The original uses incorrect verb forms and noun forms: 'had a lot of journey' is ungrammatical (countable noun 'journey' needs plural and a different verb). Use past tense 'took' for completed childhood trips. 'Haven't got time' is informal and 'vacation' should be plural 'vacations' or 'a vacation' depending on meaning; 'don't have time for vacations' is clearer. Also remove filled hesitations ('uh', 'umm') in formal correction. Suggestion: use 'took a lot of journeys' or 'went on many trips' for clear past tense, and use 'don't have time for vacations' for present inability.