Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then one or two supporting details using linking words. Correct vocabulary (e.g., 'book a seat', 'sightseeing') and fix word order. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually prefer to sit by the window when I travel. For example, I always try to book a window seat on trains and planes so I can enjoy the scenery outside, which I find interesting and relaxing.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use correct tense and vocabulary. Begin with a clear statement about family journeys, then add one specific example with linking words. Correct words like 'train' and 'by train' and improve grammar and coherence.

Ejemplo: No, I didn’t have long journeys with my family when I was a child. However, I did travel alone by train from the north to the south of Vietnam, and the breathtaking views along the route gave me many meaningful memories.

× Oh, to be honest, this is my favorite whenever I go traveling by train or my plane I always boop a seat to a seat next to the window to see the sight seeing outside is really interesting.

✓ Oh, to be honest, this is my favorite: whenever I travel by train or plane, I always book a seat next to the window because the sightseeing outside is really interesting.

Errors: run-on sentence, wrong verb forms, and word choice. 'this is my favorite' needed a colon or rephrasing to connect to the clause; 'go traveling by train or my plane' should be 'travel by train or plane' (remove unnecessary 'go' and 'my'). 'boop a seat to a seat' is incorrect — should be 'book a seat' (verb choice) and only one 'seat'. 'to see the sight seeing outside is really interesting' is ungrammatical: use 'because the sightseeing outside is really interesting' to show reason. Suggestion: break into clear clauses, use correct verbs (travel, book), and use 'because' or a relative clause to link reason.

× I don't have the long journey with my family but I have a long journey by myself.

✓ I didn't have long journeys with my family, but I had a long journey by myself.

Problems: incorrect tense and article use. 'I don't have the long journey with my family' should be past tense 'I didn't have long journeys' to match question asking about childhood. Also omit the definite article 'the' before 'long journey' when speaking generally; use plural 'journeys' or rephrase. Suggestion: use past tense for past experiences and remove unnecessary 'the'.

× For example I have trained journeys from the north to the south of Vietnam by chain.

✓ For example, I took train journeys from the north to the south of Vietnam.

Errors: incorrect verb tense and word choice. 'I have trained journeys' is incorrect: use simple past 'I took' or 'I had' for past experiences. 'By chain' is a wrong word; correct is 'by train' or 'train journeys'. Suggestion: use 'took train journeys' or 'traveled by train' to express past travel.

× So it's have many breathtaking views that give me meaningful experience in my life.

✓ They had many breathtaking views that gave me meaningful experiences in my life.

Errors: subject-verb agreement and tense consistency. 'So it's have' is ungrammatical — 'it's' (it has) does not match 'have'. The subject should be 'they' (the journeys or places) and verbs should be past tense to match earlier sentences: 'had' and 'gave'. Also 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' or use 'a meaningful experience'. Suggestion: make subject clear (they/the journeys) and use past tense verbs consistently; choose singular/plural noun appropriately.