Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Pronunciation and word choice need correction (e.g., 'towering' → 'travelling'; 'by the airport' → 'on a plane' or 'when flying'). Reduce hesitations and filler words (umm). Use a clear topic sentence and one or two concise supporting reasons linked smoothly. Be specific about what you like to see from the window. Keep to 2–3 sentences to avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually prefer a window seat when I travel. It feels more comfortable and I enjoy watching the landscape or city views pass by, which helps me relax during the journey.

Sugerencia: Structure your response with a clear topic sentence, then add a specific detail or memory. Avoid awkward phrasing like 'I opted to travel' and redundant clauses. Use linking words (for example, 'for example,' 'because') to make the answer coherent. Mention a concrete detail about Chiang Mai to make the answer vivid.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often went on long trips with my family during summer. For example, we travelled to Chiang Mai, where I remember visiting ancient temples and tasting local food, which made the trip very memorable.

× Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when towering.

✓ Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when travelling.

The verb 'towering' is incorrect in context. The intended meaning is 'travelling.' The error is using a wrong verb form/word. Use 'travelling' (verb + -ing) to indicate the action of travel.

× Actually when I travel by bus or by the airport, I would like to sit by the window because it's convenient for me and I can looking for the umm FBGS scenery.

✓ Actually, when I travel by bus or by plane, I like to sit by the window because it's convenient for me and I can look at the scenery.

Multiple issues: 'by the airport' is incorrect preposition/collocation (use 'by plane' or 'on a plane'), and 'would like' is unnecessary when stating a habitual preference (use present simple 'like'). 'Can looking' mixes modal/can with a gerund incorrectly; use base form 'look' after 'can'. Also 'look at the scenery' is the correct collocation. Remove filler 'umm FBGS' or replace with 'the'.

× Yes, I did when I was a child, I opted to travel with my family with a long journey in the summer, my family had to travel to the northern part of Thailand like a Chiang Mai is uh, very interesting for me that.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a child, I often went on long journeys with my family in the summer; we traveled to the northern part of Thailand, such as Chiang Mai, which was very interesting to me.

Problems include awkward tense and phrasing. Use simple past 'went'/'traveled' for habitual past actions. 'Opted to travel with my family with a long journey' is incorrect structure; replace with 'went on long journeys with my family'. 'Like a Chiang Mai is uh' is incorrect grammar and punctuation; use 'such as Chiang Mai' and a relative clause 'which was very interesting to me.' Also split into clearer sentences and remove fillers.