Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence (Yes, I prefer the window seat), then give one or two specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect word forms (e.g. "to Window", "train travel"). Use varied but appropriate vocabulary like "scenery", "relaxing", "refreshing".

Ejemplo: Yes, I prefer a window seat when I travel. For example, on trains I can watch the countryside pass by, which I find very relaxing and refreshing. Also, having a view helps me feel less tired during long journeys, so I usually choose the window if it's available.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use simple past for past habits (e.g. "we went"). Provide one or two specific details about destinations or activities, and use linking words like "usually" or "for example". Remove repeated fragments and fix grammar ("my parents took me" not "will").

Ejemplo: Yes, we often went on long trips during the summer when I was a child. For example, my parents took us to several beautiful cities where we visited museums and tried local foods, which are some of my happiest memories.

× Yes, I always take a window seat to Window and have a train travel because I really enjoy to see the beautiful sceneries along the side and they can and the they can really make me feel relaxed and refresh myself.

✓ Yes, I always take a window seat when I travel by train because I really enjoy seeing the beautiful scenery along the way; it really makes me feel relaxed and refreshed.

Errors: incorrect use of infinitive 'to see' after 'enjoy' (after 'enjoy' use verb+ -ing), wrong collocation 'have a train travel' and 'to Window' and awkward phrasing. 'Sceneries' is nonstandard; use 'scenery' (uncountable). 'Along the side' should be 'along the way'. 'Refresh myself' should be 'refreshed' (adjective) or 'refresh me'. Suggestions: use 'when I travel by train' for clarity, use 'enjoy seeing' (verb+ -ing), use uncountable 'scenery', and use 'refreshed' to describe the resulting state.

× Yes, every year in my primary and secondary school my parents will my parents will to take me to a long trip during the summer vacation and we have and we have we went to many beautiful cities

✓ Yes, every year when I was in primary and secondary school my parents took me on long trips during the summer vacation and we visited many beautiful cities.

Errors: mixed and incorrect tense/modal use ('will' is incorrect for past habitual actions during childhood), repetition and redundant fragments, incorrect verb choices ('take me to a long trip' should be 'took me on long trips'), and inconsistent past/present forms ('we went' vs 'we have'). Suggestions: use simple past 'took' for repeated past actions, use 'when I was in...' to set time, use 'took me on long trips' and 'we visited' or 'we went to many beautiful cities' for clear past narration.