Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer more concise and use clearer linking words. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with a linking word and avoid repetition (e.g., "by the window" repeated). Also correct minor grammar (e.g., use "it helps reduce it" or "it helps me reduce motion sickness"). Aim for 2–3 sentences and include one specific detail about the view or air.

Ejemplo: Yes — I always choose a window seat because I suffer from motion sickness. For example, the fresh air and changing scenery distract me and usually help reduce my symptoms, so I feel much more comfortable during a journey.

Sugerencia: Begin with a direct answer, then give one clear supporting detail with a linking word. Avoid short fragmented sentences; combine ideas to improve fluency (e.g., "It was a five-day school tour, and I enjoyed it because..."). Add a specific detail about the trip to make the response more vivid (where you went or an activity you did).

Ejemplo: No, I don't remember any long family trips as a child. However, I went on a five-day school tour with friends, and I really enjoyed visiting a historical town where we explored museums and walked along the river, sitting by the window on the coach the whole time.

× Yes, you will always find me by the window when travelling because I suffer from motion sickness and if I sit by the window then it helps me reduce it by distracting by the views and the fresh air and I love to see outside while travelling.

✓ Yes, you will always find me by the window when travelling because I suffer from motion sickness, and if I sit by the window it helps reduce it by distracting me with the views and the fresh air, and I love to look outside while travelling.

Several issues occur here. 'It helps me reduce it by distracting by the views' is ungrammatical: the verb 'distract' requires an object, so use 'distracting me with the views'. Remove the extra 'then' after 'if' because 'if I sit... it helps' is sufficient. Replace 'see outside' with 'look outside' for natural collocation. Also add a comma before 'and' to separate clauses. These are primarily modal/auxiliary and verb usage problems; the correction keeps the original meaning and tense.

× No, I do not remember any long journey with my family as a child, but I did travel during my school time with my friends.

✓ No, I do not remember any long journey with my family as a child, but I did travel during my school years with my friends.

'School time' is not natural in this context; use 'school years' to refer to the period. The tense is correct ('do not remember' present, 'did travel' past). This is a past-tense/contextual wording improvement to match native usage.

× It was a tour prepared by our school.

✓ It was a tour organized by our school.

'Prepared' is not the most natural verb collocation with 'school' and 'tour'; 'organized' or 'arranged' is more appropriate. This is a word choice/quantifier-type issue affecting clarity.

× It was 5 days tour.

✓ It was a five-day tour.

When describing duration with a noun modifier, use a hyphenated adjective and singular form: 'five-day tour' rather than '5 days tour'. Also write numbers in words in formal speech. This fixes the singular/plural and modifier form.

× I really enjoyed it and I sat right next to the window.

✓ I really enjoyed it, and I sat right next to the window.

This sentence is grammatically correct in tense and aspect, but needs a comma before the coordinating conjunction 'and' to separate two independent clauses. The verbs 'enjoyed' and 'sat' correctly use past tense to describe a past event.