Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer to sit by the window when travelling?
Candidato
Yes I do because I have car seats so A1 I sit in the middle of the car or sit in the behind of the car. I felt a very headache so I sometimes sit be between the window so I can feel comfortable.
Examinador
Did you have a long journey with your family as a child?
Candidato
Yes I do when I was a child, my family usually take me for a travel, uh, during the summer vacations and the win winter vacations and uh, we usually drive all by the train to this, umm, distinctions. I think it is a good way for me to.
Do you prefer to sit by the window when travelling?
Puntuación: 48.0Sugerencia: 在回答中要更直接回应问题并组织句子结构,避免不必要的重复和语法错误。可以先给出明确的主题句(例如:Yes, I prefer window seats),然后用一至两句具体说明原因或举例。注意时态和小词(如介词、冠词)的正确使用,并使用连词(such as, because, so)使表达更连贯。
Ejemplo: Yes, I prefer sitting by the window when travelling. I find it more comfortable because I can rest my head against the glass and look outside, which helps me avoid motion sickness.
Did you have a long journey with your family as a child?
Puntuación: 44.0Sugerencia: 回答需注意时态一致(过去时),句子要完整并提供具体细节,例如旅行目的地、交通方式和印象。减少语气词(uh, umm),用连词(for example, because)和时间短语(when I was a child, during summer)让叙述更清晰。
Ejemplo: Yes, I often had long journeys with my family when I was a child. For example, during summer vacations we usually took long train trips to visit relatives in another city, which gave me the chance to see new places and spend time with my parents.
× Yes I do because I have car seats so A1 I sit in the middle of the car or sit in the behind of the car.
✓ Yes, I do because of car seats, so I sit in the middle of the car or sit in the back of the car.
句子中介词和短语搭配不当。“because I have car seats”表达不清,改为“because of car seats”更自然;“in the behind of the car”是错误搭配,正确说法是“in the back of the car”。建议牢记常用短语搭配,例如“in the middle of” 和“in the back of”。
× I felt a very headache so I sometimes sit be between the window so I can feel comfortable.
✓ I felt a bad headache, so I sometimes sit by the window so I can feel comfortable.
原句中形容词/名词搭配错误,‘a very headache’ 不正确,应为 ‘a bad headache’ 或 ‘a very bad headache’;动词形式和介词也有问题:‘sit be between the window’ 不合语法,正确是 ‘sit by the window’ 或 ‘sit between the windows’。建议区分可数名词与形容词搭配,并记住常用介词短语(by the window / between the windows)。
× Yes I do when I was a child, my family usually take me for a travel, uh, during the summer vacations and the win winter vacations and uh, we usually drive all by the train to this, umm, distinctions.
✓ Yes, when I was a child, my family usually took me on trips during the summer and winter vacations, and we usually travelled by train to these destinations.
时态与动词形式错误:描述过去习惯应使用过去时,故将 'do' 改为省略并用 'when I was a child' 开头;'take' 应用过去式 'took';'for a travel' 表达不自然,应改为 'on trips' 或 'for travel';'win winter' 是重复错误,应为 'winter';'drive all by the train' 搭配错误,坐火车应说 'travelled/travel by train';'distinctions' 拼写及语义错误,应为 'destinations'。建议注意过去习惯用过去时,常见短语搭配(take someone on a trip, travel by train, destinations)。
× I think it is a good way for me to.
✓ I think it was a good way for me.
句子结构不完整,原句以不定式结尾 'to',缺少宾语或动词。因上下文在谈过去经历,应使用过去时:'I think it was a good way for me.' 建议避免以 'to' 悬空结尾,完整表达意思。