Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Correct vocabulary (e.g. 'scenery' not 'chains'), avoid filler words and repetition, and keep to 3–4 sentences. Also use coherent linking words such as 'for example' and 'because' properly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually prefer to sit by the window when I travel because I enjoy looking at the scenery and taking photographs. For example, on train journeys I like watching mountains and rolling countryside pass by, so I often choose a window seat to get better views and photo opportunities.

Sugerencia: Improve clarity and accuracy. Provide a direct topic sentence confirming the experience, then give one or two clear, specific details about the trip. Remove hesitations and uncertain words, and correct place names. Use linking words (e.g. 'when', 'for example') to make your answer coherent and within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a long family journey when I was a child. We used to travel to Bagan in Myanmar, and I remember the ancient temples and wide plains vividly. For example, the temple-filled landscape looked like a living painting, and I loved exploring it with my parents.

× I prefer sitting by the window when I travel because I like the scenery, chains and taking photographs.

✓ I prefer sitting by the window when I travel because I like the scenery, trains and taking photographs.

The sentence uses correct verb+ -ing form 'sitting' and 'taking'. The main issue is a likely word choice error: 'chains' is incorrect in context and should be 'trains'. Suggestion: use accurate nouns matching context; no change to the -ing forms is needed.

× Sometimes. For example, on train journeys I usually sit by the window and spend a lot of time by seeing mountains, a landscape, views and solo.

✓ Sometimes. For example, on train journeys I usually sit by the window and spend a lot of time looking at mountains, landscapes, views and being alone.

The phrase 'spend a lot of time by seeing' is ungrammatical; English uses 'spend time' + -ing without 'by' (e.g., 'spend time looking at'). 'A landscape' should be plural to match other items ('landscapes'), and 'solo' used as an adjective needs a clearer form, so 'being alone' or 'traveling alone' fits. Suggestion: use 'spend time looking at' and ensure parallel plural nouns.

× Yes, I heard a long journey with my family when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a long journey with my family when I was a child.

The verb 'heard' is incorrect for experiencing a journey. The appropriate past tense verb is 'had' or 'went on'. Suggestion: use 'had' or 'went on' to describe past experiences (e.g., 'I went on a long journey with my family').

× I, we usually, uh, went to, uh, we usually used to go to baguette.

✓ We usually used to go to Bagan.

The original contains disfluencies and repetition. 'Baguette' is likely a mispronunciation of 'Bagan' (a place). Combine into a single clear sentence: 'We usually used to go to Bagan.' Suggestion: remove fillers and repeaters, and use the correct place name; 'used to' indicates habitual past actions.

× Umm, I really like the Bagan landscapes and if I have to describe well, what about the bulb again, it is like a living painting.

✓ I really like the Bagan landscapes, and if I have to describe them well, the temples look like a living painting.

'If I have to describe well' is awkward; better is 'if I have to describe them well'. 'What about the bulb again' is unclear—likely referring to 'the temples' or 'the stupas' in Bagan. Replace with a clear noun. Use plural 'landscapes' matched with 'them'. Suggestion: identify the correct noun (temples/stupas) and match pronouns and word order for clarity.