Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Bạn trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp, phát âm và câu văn tự nhiên hơn. Cụ thể: 1) Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ “refer to sit” → “prefer to sit”; “It's give me” → “It gives me”); 2) Giữ câu ngắn gọn tối đa 3–4 câu, tránh lặp ý ("comfortable and relax" lặp ý); 3) Dùng liên từ để nối ý mạch lạc (for example → for instance / because); 4) Thêm một chi tiết cụ thể hơn về cảnh quan để tăng tính cụ thể (ví dụ: mountains, clouds, city skyline).

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually prefer to sit by the window when I travel. It gives me a sense of comfort and helps me relax because I can watch the scenery go by. For instance, I enjoy looking at mountains and rivers, which makes long journeys feel shorter.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời rõ ràng, có chi tiết và cảm xúc. Để hoàn thiện hơn: 1) Bổ sung một câu mở đầu rõ ràng (Yes/No + topic sentence) để trả lời trực tiếp; 2) Tránh câu quá dài bằng cách tách thành 2–3 câu; 3) Thêm một chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: hoạt động cụ thể, thời tiết, ấn tượng nhất) để tăng tính sinh động; 4) Dùng từ kết nối đơn giản để mạch lạc (for example / we also).

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child, my family and I went to Da Nang for the weekend. We spent our days sunbathing on the beach and exploring the rocky coast. I especially remember playing in the warm sand with my siblings while the sun was shining, which made it a very memorable holiday.

× Yes, I usually refer to sit by the window when I travel.

✓ Yes, I usually prefer to sit by the window when I travel.

The verb 'refer' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'prefer' (collocation). Use 'prefer to do something' to express choice. Suggestion: learn common verb-collocation pairs such as 'prefer to', 'enjoy -ing', 'like to'.\n

× It's give me a feeling that more comfortable and relax there and I can enjoy watching the scenery as we go.

✓ It gives me a feeling of being more comfortable and relaxed there, and I can enjoy watching the scenery as we go.

Multiple issues: subject-verb agreement ('It gives' not 'It's give'); incorrect structure 'a feeling that more comfortable' should be 'a feeling of being more comfortable'; adjective/adverb forms: use 'relaxed' (adjective) rather than 'relax' (verb) and 'more comfortable' is fine. Also add a comma before 'and' to join clauses. Suggestion: check subject-verb agreement, use correct noun phrases ('a feeling of ...'), and choose correct adjective forms for states (comfortable/relaxed).\n

× For example, I can look out at the landscape which help me relax during long journeys.

✓ For example, I can look out at the landscape, which helps me relax during long journeys.

Relative clause needs subject-verb agreement: 'which helps' because the relative pronoun refers to 'looking out at the landscape' or 'the landscape' which is singular; use 'helps' not 'help'. Also add a comma before the non-restrictive relative clause. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with their subjects in relative clauses and use commas with non-essential clauses.\n

× Did you have a long journey with your family as a child?

✓ (Question is fine as written)

This question is grammatically acceptable; no change needed. The auxiliary 'Did' with base verb 'have' correctly forms the past tense question.\n

× When I was a kid, I went on a trip with my family to Da Nang for the weekend.

✓ When I was a kid, I went on a trip with my family to Da Nang for the weekend.

This sentence is correct in past tense; no change needed.\n

× We spent our time sunbathing on the beach and exploring the rocky coast, and it was a memorable family holiday because we all relaxed and laughed together.

✓ We spent our time sunbathing on the beach and exploring the rocky coast, and it was a memorable family holiday because we all relaxed and laughed together.

This sentence is grammatically correct. The verb forms 'sunbathing' and 'exploring' are parallel gerunds, and past tense 'relaxed' and 'laughed' are appropriate. No change required.