Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and incorrect phrases (e.g. "behind the window", "cut a sea"). Add one supporting detail connected with a linking word. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when I travel. I enjoy watching the changing scenery, so I always try to get a window seat. For example, on long trips I like seeing landscapes or coastlines because it helps me relax and pass the time.

Sugerencia: Make your answer clearer and more fluent. Start with a direct statement, remove hesitations, and give specific details about the trip (where you went, who was there, what you liked). Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid vague phrases like "display is" and "East Asian Tempest."

Ejemplo: Yes, I went on a long trip with my family when I was a child. We visited a famous scenic area in East Asia, and I remember being amazed by the dramatic landscapes and colorful temples. Because of the vivid views and lively atmosphere, the place felt like a living painting to me.

× I really like sitting behind the window.

✓ I really like sitting by the window.

Incorrect preposition collocated with the -ing form: 'behind the window' implies a position at the back of the window, but the intended meaning is to sit next to it while traveling. Use 'by the window' to show proximity. Also this change keeps the -ing verb form correct for 'like'.

× Whenever I travel somewhere I book a ticket to cut a sea by the window.

✓ Whenever I travel somewhere, I book a ticket by the window to enjoy the sea view.

The original sentence uses incorrect and unclear prepositions and word order ('to cut a sea by the window' is ungrammatical). The correction places the prepositional phrase 'by the window' next to 'ticket' and clarifies purpose with 'to enjoy the sea view'. Also a comma after the time clause improves sentence structure.

× Because I like watching. Because I like watching the scenery through the window.

✓ I like watching the scenery through the window.

Sentence fragments: starting sentences with 'Because' creates dependent clauses that need a main clause. Combining into a single complete sentence removes the fragments and clearly expresses the idea.

× Yes, I traveled umm to begin with my family when I was young.

✓ Yes, I traveled with my family when I was young.

Redundant and awkward phrasing 'to begin with' is unnecessary and interrupts fluency. The simple past 'traveled' is correct; removing 'to begin with' yields a natural past-tense response.

× Umm, I display is uh, is a tourist attraction for East, uh, Asian Tempest.

✓ Umm, it is a tourist attraction in East Asia called 'Tempest'.

Original is ungrammatical and has word order problems and unclear noun phrases. Replace the incorrect subject 'I display' with the correct dummy subject 'it' and use 'in East Asia' for region. If 'Tempest' is the name of the place, present it clearly. Adjust as needed to match the actual place name.

× I really like the the place.

✓ I really like the place.

Duplicate definite article 'the the' is an error. Remove the extra article; 'the place' is the correct noun phrase.

× If I had to describe one word for that place, it is like a living painting.

✓ If I had to describe that place in one word, it would be 'a living painting'.

Word order and article use require adjustment. 'Describe in one word' is the standard phrasing. Use conditional modal 'would' in the result clause with the conditional 'If I had to...' and place the descriptive phrase in quotes or as a noun phrase with the indefinite article 'a'.