Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitations and grammatical errors, give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words to make ideas coherent (for example: 'because', 'so', 'for example'). Keep answers concise (maximum 4–5 sentences).

Ejemplo: Yes. I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy seeing the changing landscape. For example, I like watching fields and small villages pass by because they give me new ideas and help me relax. So I usually spend most of the journey looking outside.

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a direct answer, then give a specific example and reason. Use linking words ('because', 'for example', 'so') and avoid repetition. Aim for clear sentence structure (subject + verb + object).

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of scenery outside the car window because I want to share beautiful views with my family and friends. For example, last month I photographed a colourful sunset and sent it to my sister. I keep these photos as memories of my trips.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then provide specific reasons and a brief example. Use correct tense and subject-verb agreement. Use linking words ('because', 'so', 'for example') and avoid repeating words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer the mountains because the air is fresh and the environment helps me relax. For example, when I have free time my friends and I visit mountains to hike and sometimes join clean-up activities, which reduces my stress. So I feel comfortable and refreshed after each trip.

× Of course, when I travel by bus or car, uh, I often to look, uh, nature in, in the car from the car because I can, uh, make me get a new experience and then make me, uh, watching, uh, many things of, uh, uh, outside in the way. So I like this.

✓ Of course, when I travel by bus or car, I often look at the scenery from the car because I can have a new experience and watch many things outside along the way, so I like it.

The sentence used incorrect verb forms and unnecessary infinitives and participles (e.g., 'to look', 'make me get', 'make me watching'). Use the verb look with the preposition at (look at the scenery). Replace awkward phrases with simple verb forms: 'have a new experience' instead of 'make me get a new experience' and 'watch many things' instead of 'make me watching many things'. Also replace 'in the way' with 'along the way' and 'I like this' with 'I like it' for natural English.

× Absolutely yes, because sometime when I travel in, when I stay in the car, So when I have I when I see something too beautiful outside the way I can take a photo and then I send with my family, with my friend because they're beautiful for me. So I think yes, something like this.

✓ Absolutely. Sometimes when I am travelling or staying in the car and I see something very beautiful outside, I can take a photo and send it to my family and friends because I find it beautiful.

Tense and form errors: use present continuous 'am travelling' or present simple 'travel' consistently. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. Remove redundant words ('when I have I when'). Use 'very beautiful' instead of 'too beautiful' in this context. Use correct verb phrase 'send it to my family and friends' and plural 'friends'. Replace 'they're beautiful for me' with 'I find it beautiful' for clarity.

× For me, I prefer mountains because mountains make me feel fresh when I'm going there, when when I have a free time, I me and friend going to visit the mountain, going to clean the mountain because make me reduce stress, make me feel comfortable. So.

✓ For me, I prefer the mountains because they make me feel refreshed when I go there. When I have free time, my friend and I go to visit the mountains and help clean them because it reduces my stress and makes me feel comfortable.

Pronoun and article errors: use 'the mountains' when speaking generally about mountain areas. Replace 'mountains make me feel fresh' with 'make me feel refreshed'. Use correct subject order 'my friend and I' not 'I me and friend'. Use base verb forms 'go to visit' and 'help clean' instead of 'going to visit' in this context. Use 'it reduces my stress' and 'makes me feel comfortable' with proper subjects and verbs. Remove the trailing 'So.' and provide a complete sentence.