Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms. For example, say why you enjoy looking out (interest in landscapes or learning about places) and how it makes you feel, using correct tense and articles.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. I enjoy watching the changing landscapes because it helps me learn about different neighbourhoods and landmarks. Moreover, I find it relaxing, so I often feel calmer during the journey.

Sugerencia: Use correct verb tense and clearer reasons. Give one main reason and a brief detail, linked logically. Avoid repeating phrases and incorrect pluralization. Explain how often or what kind of scenes you photograph to add specificity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of scenery outside the car window because I find some views striking, especially at sunrise or near the coast. I usually take quick photos to share on social media so friends can see the beautiful places I pass.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then provide two specific, coherent reasons using linking words. Avoid unclear words (e.g. 'molten') and incorrect structures. Mention concrete activities or feelings that explain why you prefer mountains.

Ejemplo: I prefer the mountains because I love being surrounded by nature and fresh air. For example, hiking and sitting by a quiet trail help me relax and reduce stress, and I enjoy the sense of freedom and independence I feel there.

× Yes, actually I look out the window when I travel by bus or car.

✓ Yes, actually I look out of the window when I travel by bus or car.

Preposition use: 'look out of' or 'look out' + 'the window' is standard; adding 'of' is optional in some dialects but 'look out of the window' is clearer. Also keeps present simple for habitual action.

× Yes, I like to look scenery because can make me like a learn about often about a lot of the roads.

✓ Yes, I like to look at the scenery because it helps me learn about many of the roads.

Multiple errors: need preposition 'look at' (incorrect use of prepositions), missing subject and verb ('it helps' — sentence lacked subject), incorrect adjective/quantifier 'a lot of the roads' should be 'many of the roads'. Use of 'learn about' requires an object. The correction puts sentence into clear present simple habitual form.

× I can look everything and I can come through and relax when I see them.

✓ I can see everything and relax when I see the scenery.

Original has incorrect verbs and unclear pronoun reference ('come through' and 'them' are inappropriate). Use 'see' instead of 'look' for perception of everything; remove redundant modal 'can' for natural phrasing. Clarify the noun 'scenery' to avoid vague pronoun.

× Yes, of course I took a photos of the scenery outside because when I saw the scenery it's so beautiful.

✓ Yes, of course I took photos of the scenery outside because when I saw it, it was so beautiful.

Tense consistency: past actions should use past tense consistently ('took' and 'saw' are fine) and referent consistency ('it' for scenery). Also 'a photos' is pluralness error removed; 'it was' matches past observation.

× Yes of course I took a pic photo because I need to post on my social media and and would like to everyone know that spread is very beautiful.

✓ Yes, of course I took a photo because I needed to post it on my social media and wanted everyone to know that the place is very beautiful.

Several errors fixed: singular form 'a photo' and past tense 'needed' to match 'took'. Preposition 'post on' kept, added object 'it'. 'Would like to everyone know' corrected to 'wanted everyone to know' (sentence structure and verb form). 'Spread' was incorrect word choice; likely meant 'place'.

× I prefer mountain, I like about natural so much when I can't.

✓ I prefer the mountains; I really like nature.

Use plural 'the mountains' for preference and definite article 'the'. 'Like about natural' is incorrect—use noun 'nature'. Remove 'when I can't' which is ungrammatical and unclear.

× When I say molten and allow of molten I feel I can relax, I can stay calm and I can stay without stressful and I can leave luck by myself.

✓ When I am in the mountains, I feel I can relax, stay calm, and be free from stress; I can enjoy my own company.

Original contains many incorrect words and phrases ('molten', 'allow of molten', 'leave luck'). Replaced with clear clause 'When I am in the mountains' and natural expressions: 'be free from stress' and 'enjoy my own company'. Verbs simplified and parallel structure used.

× I can do everything what I want to do. Yes.

✓ I can do whatever I want.

Use 'whatever' instead of 'everything what' which is ungrammatical. Shorter, natural phrase conveys same meaning.