Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and grammar (e.g., ‘give’ not ‘gave’).

Ejemplo: Yes, I always look out the window when I travel by bus or car because the scenery relaxes me. For example, I often enjoy watching rivers and green fields pass by, which makes the journey feel refreshing.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler and repetition; use a clear structure: topic sentence + specific reason or example. Use singular/plural correctly and avoid redundant phrases like ‘always capturing my eyes’.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos through the car window because I like to capture special moments. For instance, I photograph sunsets and interesting countryside views and then share the best shots with my friends and family.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer, then explain with one or two specific reasons. Avoid repetition and fix grammar (use present tense: ‘gives me a sense of peace’). Use linking words like ‘because’ and ‘for example’.

Ejemplo: I prefer the sea because it makes me feel calm. For example, watching the sunset over the water fills me with peace and happiness, and I often stay longer on the beach to enjoy that quiet moment.

× Yes, I do always look out the window at the scenery when traveling by bus or car because the breathtaking landscapes always catching my eye always catch my eye and and it gave me a sense of refreshment, especially the river outside.

✓ Yes, I always look out the window at the scenery when traveling by bus or car because the breathtaking landscapes always catch my eye and give me a sense of refreshment, especially the river outside.

Errors: redundant present participle 'catching' used incorrectly and repeated phrases 'always catch my eye' and double 'and'. Also tense mismatch: 'gave' (past) should be present 'give' to match habitual present 'I always look'. Suggestions: remove the unnecessary participle, delete duplicate words, and keep verb tenses consistent (use present simple for habitual actions). Use 'always catch' and 'give' to agree with plural 'landscapes'.

× Yeah, I take a variety of photos of the scenery outside the car window because the breathtaking landscapes are always capturing my always capturing my eyes, and I enjoy sharing them with my friends and my families, especially the beautiful moment.

✓ Yeah, I take a variety of photos of the scenery outside the car window because the breathtaking landscapes always catch my eye, and I enjoy sharing them with my friends and family, especially beautiful moments.

Errors: unnecessary present participle 'are ... capturing' when present simple 'always catch' is correct for habitual actions. Duplicate fragment 'always capturing my' repeated. 'Families' is incorrect when referring to friends and family as a group; use 'family'. 'The beautiful moment' should be plural or indefinite: 'beautiful moments'. Suggestions: use present simple for habitual actions, remove repetition, and use correct count noun forms.

× I prefer the sea because the sea always gave me a sense of peace and extremely extremely happy especially when I the sun set on the sea above the sea and they just capturing my feelings and.

✓ I prefer the sea because the sea always gives me a sense of peace and makes me extremely happy, especially when the sun sets over the sea and it captures my feelings.

Errors: tense mismatch—'gave' is past but context requires present simple 'gives' for habitual feelings. Missing verb for 'extremely happy'—need 'makes me extremely happy'. Word order and redundancy issues: 'I the sun set on the sea above the sea' is ungrammatical; correct to 'when the sun sets over the sea'. 'They just capturing my feelings' uses wrong pronoun and participle; use 'it captures my feelings'. Suggestions: use present simple for habitual preferences, include necessary verbs ('makes me'), correct pronoun reference and verb forms, and remove redundancies and repetitions.