Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cevap kısa ve açık, ancak dilbilgisi ve akıcılık sorunları var. Tekrar eden kelimeler ve dolgu ifadeleri (“uh”, “umm”, “like”) azaltılmalı. Ayrıca fiil zamanına dikkat edilmeli (I traveling → I travel veya I was travelling). Cümle yapısını netleştirmek için konu cümlesi kurup bir bağlaçla çocukluk alışkanlığını açıklayabilirsiniz. Örneğin: “I usually look at my phone when I travel now, but when I was a child I used to look out of the window.”

Ejemplo: I usually look at my phone when I travel by bus or car, mainly scrolling TikTok. However, when I was a child I used to watch the scenery out of the window because I liked seeing the changing landscapes.

Sugerencia: Cevap belirsiz ve dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor (I used to usually took → I usually took ya da I used to take). Cümleler gereksiz tekrarlar ve dolgu kelimeleri içeriyor; daha doğrudan ve spesifik bir örnek verin (ne sıklıkla, hangi cihazla, hangi tür manzaralar). Bağlaç kullanarak mantıksal akışı güçlendirin.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often took photos of the scenery with my iPad when I was a child, especially of mountains and rivers during long car journeys. Nowadays I rarely take photos because I prefer to relax or use my phone for messages.

Sugerencia: Cevap net bir tercih belirtiyor, ancak tekrarlar ve anlamsal karışıklık var (“makes more it”). Duygusal sebepleri daha akıcı ve spesifik bir şekilde açıklayın; bağlaçlarla neden-sonuç ilişkisi kurun (because, so, therefore). Ayrıca kelime çeşitliliği kullanın (relaxed, peaceful, soothing).

Ejemplo: I prefer the sea because its sound and wide view help me feel relaxed and peaceful. For example, sitting by the shore calms my mind and reduces stress after a busy week.

× Actually, I always use my phone when I traveling by bus or car, uh like scrolling TikTok or something like that.

✓ Actually, I always use my phone when I am travelling by bus or car, like scrolling TikTok or something like that.

The verb after 'when' needs a continuous form with the auxiliary 'be' for an ongoing action. Use 'am travelling' for first person singular present continuous. Suggestion: use 'I am travelling' or 'I travel' depending on whether you mean a habitual action ('I usually travel') or an action in progress ('I am travelling').

× But I always, when I was a kid, I always umm, I was always look out the window at this.

✓ But when I was a kid, I always used to look out the window at it.

Mixes present habitual 'always' with past tense. Use past habitual 'used to' or past simple 'looked'. Also 'look out the window at this' is unnatural; use 'at it' or 'out the window'. Suggestion: 'When I was a kid, I always used to look out the window.'

× So like I said, when I was a child I used to look out of the window a lot and umm, I had a iPad and umm.

✓ So like I said, when I was a child I used to look out of the window a lot, and I had an iPad.

Article error 'a iPad' should be 'an iPad' because 'iPad' begins with a vowel sound. Also ensure punctuation to join clauses. Suggestion: use 'an' before words that start with vowel sounds.

× I used to usually took the photos of my iPad.

✓ I usually used to take photos with my iPad.

Incorrect combination of 'used to' with past tense 'took'. After 'used to' the base form 'take' is required. Also word order: 'usually used to' is acceptable. Preposition: use 'with my iPad' rather than 'of my iPad' to mean using the device to take photos. Suggestion: say 'I usually used to take photos with my iPad.'

× Nowadays I prefer to look at the sea because it makes more it, it makes me more comfortable and it makes me help to calm and umm.

✓ Nowadays I prefer to look at the sea because it makes me more comfortable and helps me to calm down.

Multiple problems: 'it makes more it' is ungrammatical and redundant; 'makes me more comfortable' is fine. 'It makes me help to calm' is incorrect structure; use 'helps me to calm down' or 'helps me calm down'. Suggestion: simplify to 'it makes me feel more comfortable and helps me calm down.'