Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Speak more clearly and organize your answer: begin with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and fix grammar (use correct tense and articles). Use one linking word to connect ideas (for example, "because" or "so").

Ejemplo: I always look out the window when I travel by bus or car because I love nature. For example, I choose a window seat to enjoy views of fields, villages and roadside trees, which helps me relax during the journey.

Sugerencia: Make your answer concise and provide one clear reason followed by a specific example. Correct grammar (verb forms and articles) and avoid filler words. Use a linking word such as "because" or "for example" to connect reason and example.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos outside the car window because photography energizes me and improves my skills. For example, on a recent trip I captured several photos of a river valley and wildflowers, which I later edited and shared with friends.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid hesitation sounds (uh, um). Give one or two clear reasons with specific details and use linking words like "because" and "so". Correct word choice (e.g., 'hike' rather than 'track') and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer the mountains because they offer spectacular panoramic views and peaceful surroundings. I also enjoy hiking on mountain trails, which challenges me and lets me see valleys and peaks up close.

× Yes, I am a nature lover so I probably when I'm in travelling on Busark or I choose only window seats.

✓ Yes, I am a nature lover, so when I'm traveling by bus I usually choose window seats.

The sentence has incorrect prepositions and word order. Use 'traveling by bus' (correct preposition 'by' with transport) and 'choose window seats' (no article 'only' needed before 'window seats' in this context). Also 'probably when I'm in travelling on Busark' is ungrammatical; replace with 'I usually' to match intended meaning. Suggestions: use 'by' for modes of transport and place adverbs like 'usually' before the main verb.

× It is very good to me and we can see the beautiful places beside the roads in a beautiful plants and I enjoy the sceneries while driving.

✓ It is very enjoyable for me because we can see beautiful places and plants beside the road, and I enjoy the scenery while traveling.

Multiple sentence structure problems: incorrect phrase 'very good to me' should be 'very enjoyable for me'; 'beside the roads in a beautiful plants' mixes prepositions and articles incorrectly; 'sceneries' is countable/uncountable issue — 'scenery' is usually uncountable. Also use consistent verb 'traveling' to match context. Suggestions: simplify clauses, use correct prepositions ('beside the road'), and use uncountable noun 'scenery'.

× Yes, I'm I'm a very skilled photographer so I would like to take photos of the scenery outside the car window.

✓ Yes, I'm a very skilled photographer, so I like to take photos of the scenery outside the car window.

The original mixes conditional/modal 'would like' which implies hypothetical; the question asks about general preference, so use simple present 'like'. Also remove duplicate 'I'm'. Suggestion: use simple present for habits and preferences (he/she/ I like).

× Because it boosts my energy and it also develop my skills and I am a very nature lover.

✓ Because it boosts my energy and also develops my skills, and I am a nature lover.

Subject-verb agreement error where 'develop' should be 'develops' to match singular subject 'it'. Also 'a very nature lover' is awkward — 'a nature lover' is sufficient. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with their subjects and avoid unnecessary modifiers.

× So while traveling in between the in between the journey I would like to take the some of the pictures of the nature and the plants and the beautiful valleys river.

✓ So during the journey I like to take some pictures of nature, plants, and beautiful valleys and rivers.

The phrase 'in between the in between the journey' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'during the journey'. 'I would like to take the some of the pictures' should be 'I like to take some pictures' for habitual action. Also 'valleys river' should be 'valleys and rivers'. Suggestions: remove redundancy, use correct determiners ('some' without 'the'), and parallel list structure.

× Most of the time I prefer only mountains.

✓ Most of the time I prefer mountains.

The adverb 'only' is unnecessary and awkward here. The present simple 'prefer' correctly expresses general preference. Suggestion: drop 'only' unless emphasizing exclusivity, e.g., 'I prefer only mountains' could be kept but is unnatural; 'I prefer mountains' is clearer.

× Because uh, we can uh, have a beautiful, uh, play beautiful views from the up top of the hills, the top of the mountains.

✓ Because we can have beautiful views from the tops of hills and mountains.

Remove disfluencies and redundant phrases ('up top of the hills, the top of the mountains'). Use plural 'tops' when referring generally, and 'views' is sufficient. Suggestion: simplify and use parallel nouns.

× And uh, most of the time I will learn, uh, I would like to track at everyone in most of the times in tracking, so I prefer only mountains.

✓ And most of the time I go trekking; I enjoy hiking, so I prefer mountains.

Original mixes tenses and incorrect verbs: 'I will learn' is wrong, 'track' should be 'trek' or 'go trekking', and 'at everyone' is nonsensical. Use present simple for habitual actions: 'I go trekking' or 'I enjoy hiking'. Also remove 'only' as before. Suggestions: use correct verbs for activities ('trek', 'hike'), and simple present for habits.