Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid unclear words and irrelevant fragments. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., ‘bus’, not ‘baths’), and keep to under five sentences. Link ideas with simple words like ‘because’ or ‘for example’.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often look out the window when I travel by bus or car. For example, when I visit my grandmother by bus I enjoy watching the countryside and sometimes I can see Mount Fuji in the distance. This scenery helps me relax during the journey.

Sugerencia: Make the answer more polished: give a clear main sentence, then one reason and an example. Remove filler sounds (umm) and fix grammar (e.g., ‘if I drive’). Use linking words like ‘but’ and ‘so’ to connect ideas. Be specific about what you photograph and why.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window. If I am driving I cannot take pictures, but when a friend or family member is driving I photograph seas, mountains and fields because they help me remember the trip and the view's colours.

Sugerencia: Answer directly by stating a clear preference (mountains or sea) and then give one or two specific reasons. Avoid hesitation words and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like ‘because’ and ‘so’ to make the response coherent and specific (e.g., mention activities or sensations).

Ejemplo: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy hiking and the fresh, cool air. The quiet environment and green views help me relax more than the busy beaches, so I usually choose mountain trips for rest and fresh air.

× Yes, I look out the window at the scenery when traveling by vehicles, especially bus when I visited.

✓ Yes, I look out the window at the scenery when I travel by vehicle, especially by bus when I visit.

Original sentence mixes tenses and uses plural 'vehicles' and lacks prepositions. Use simple present 'travel' to match habitual action. Use singular 'vehicle' or 'by vehicle' and include 'by' before 'bus'. Keep tense consistent: 'when I visit' for habitual visits.

× When I visit my grandmother's house I usually use baths and drilling.

✓ When I visit my grandmother's house, I usually use buses and trains.

The original uses incorrect words 'baths' and 'drilling' likely intended 'buses' and 'trains'. Also needs a comma after the introductory clause. Correct prepositions/words and punctuation clarify meaning.

× The day I usually see Mount Fuji at.

✓ That is the day I usually see Mount Fuji.

Original is a sentence fragment with incorrect word order and stray preposition 'at'. Reorder to form a complete sentence: 'That is the day I usually see Mount Fuji.' This makes subject and verb clear.

× Yes, I take photos of the scenery outside the car window umm although it's difficult if I umm drive myself but if I my friends or families drive the car I usually try to photos like seas, mountains it helps me remember the.

✓ Yes, I take photos of the scenery outside the car window. Although it's difficult if I drive myself, if my friends or family drive, I usually try to take photos of the sea or mountains because it helps me remember them.

Multiple issues: missing infinitive 'to take' after 'try', incorrect plural 'families' should be 'family' as group, and sentence run-on. Rephrase into two sentences, use commas to separate clauses, use 'sea or mountains' (singular/plural as examples), and include object 'them' to complete 'helps me remember'.

× Yes, I was like the mountains and the sea these national scenery umm, help me relax and by visiting these natural places, I I can uh, get more comfortable. This helps me to.

✓ Yes, I like the mountains and the sea; these natural sceneries help me relax, and by visiting these places I can become more comfortable.

Original uses incorrect past tense 'was like' instead of present 'like' for general preference. 'National scenery' is incorrect choice; use 'natural scenery' or 'natural sceneries'. Remove filler words and complete the final clause 'become more comfortable'. Ensure subject-verb agreement 'sceneries help'.