Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答基本直接，也提供了影响和原因，但“”Tobulins”不是合适的英语单词，可能想说“tall buildings”。注意时态一致：描述当前情况应使用“block”和“make”，而不是“blocked”。另外，“because they are in the city center”逻辑不够准确，因为建筑本身不一定都位于市中心；可以改为说明高楼集中在市中心，所以那里更拥挤。建议使用“However”连接转折，并把答案控制在两到三句，使表达更自然。

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home, especially in the city center. However, they block out a lot of sunlight and make the area feel more crowded because so many people work and live there.

Sugerencia: 回答切题，也列举了寺庙、教堂和摩天大楼等具体例子。不过，“Well not so often”应改为“Not very often”，“where I'm at”在这里不够自然，可以说“where I am”或直接说“the place I visit”。条件句的时态应保持一致：用“If I see..., I take...”表示习惯，或用“If I saw..., I would take...”表示假设。建议减少“in time”这种不必要的表达，并使用“because”补充拍照原因。

Ejemplo: Not very often. However, if I visit a place with a distinctive building, such as a temple, a church, or a modern skyscraper, I usually take out my phone and photograph it because I want to remember its design.

Sugerencia: 答案的主题明确，但存在明显的词汇、语法和完成度问题。“scenic sport”应为“scenic spot”，“our of China”应改为“China’s”，而“a place where it indicates”表达不自然，可以说“a place that reflects China’s long history”。最后一句没有完成，影响流利度和有效性。建议使用“not only...but also...”结构后补充一个具体理由，例如园林、湖泊或历史建筑，并在两到三句内完整结束。

Ejemplo: I’d like to visit the Summer Palace in Beijing. It is not only a famous scenic spot but also a historical site that reflects China’s long history. I’m especially interested in its beautiful gardens, traditional buildings, and peaceful lake.

Sugerencia: 回答立场清楚，也提供了两个理由：视野好、比较安静。不过句子过长，连接不自然。“it has a better view where”应改为“it offers a better view, so I can...”；“except for that”应改为“Besides that”。“it's living in the high rise building”应改为“living in a high-rise building”，而“noises which comes”应为“noise that comes”或“noises that come”。建议拆成两句，并使用“Moreover”或“Besides”组织补充理由。

Ejemplo: Yes, I’d prefer to live in a high-rise building because it offers a great view, so I could enjoy both the sunrise and the sunset. Besides that, apartments on higher floors are usually quieter, as they are farther away from noise from playgrounds and busy streets.

× Yes, there are many Tobulins where I live but I think that they blocked the sunlight and make the city more crowded because they are in the city center.

✓ Yes, there are many Tobulins where I live, but I think that they block the sunlight and make the city more crowded because they are in the city center.

这里描述的是建筑物目前造成的影响，应使用一般现在时。主语“they”是复数，所以谓语应为“block”，不能使用过去式“blocked”。

× Well not so often. It depends on where I'm at if I see some particular buildings such as temples, churches or some modern skyscrapers, I would take out my phone to capture them in time.

✓ Well, not very often. It depends on whether I see particular buildings, such as temples, churches, or modern skyscrapers. If I do, I would take out my phone to capture them.

“It depends on”后面表示“是否”时，应使用“whether”，而不是把“where”和“if”放在一起。将条件句单独表达也能使句子结构更清晰。

× It is not only a very famous scenic sport but also a place where it indicates the long history of our of China.

✓ It is not only a very famous scenic sport but also a place that indicates the long history of China.

“a place”在后面的定语从句中是“indicates”的主语，因此应使用关系代词“that”，不能使用表示地点的“where”。同时，“our of China”结构错误，应改为“of China”。

× So I think it indicates the

✓ So I think it indicates the long history of China.

这句话在“the”后面没有完成宾语，意思没有表达完整。冠词“the”后面通常需要接名词或名词短语，例如“the long history of China”。

× Well, I prefer to live in a tall building because it has a better view where I can enjoy both sunrise and sunset and except for that, it's living in the high rise building can help me get rid of those noises which comes from the children on the playground.

✓ Well, I prefer to live in a tall building because it has a better view where I can enjoy both sunrise and sunset. Besides that, living in a high-rise building can help me get rid of those noises that come from the children on the playground.

“high-rise building”是可数名词单数，前面需要使用不定冠词“a”，所以不能说“the high-rise building”。此外，这里用“living in...”作主语，比“it's living...”更自然。

× Well, I prefer to live in a tall building because it has a better view where I can enjoy both sunrise and sunset and except for that, it's living in the high rise building can help me get rid of those noises which comes from the children on the playground.

✓ Well, I prefer to live in a tall building because it has a better view where I can enjoy both sunrise and sunset. Besides that, living in a high-rise building can help me get rid of those noises that come from the children on the playground.

“except for that, it's living...”的结构不正确。表示“除此之外”时，可以使用“Besides that”，后面用动名词短语“living in a high-rise building”作主语。建议避免在同一个长句中连接太多内容，可以拆成两个句子。

× Well, I prefer to live in a tall building because it has a better view where I can enjoy both sunrise and sunset and except for that, it's living in the high rise building can help me get rid of those noises which comes from the children on the playground.

✓ Well, I prefer to live in a tall building because it has a better view where I can enjoy both sunrise and sunset. Besides that, living in a high-rise building can help me get rid of those noises that come from the children on the playground.

关系代词“that”指代复数名词“noises”，所以后面的谓语应使用复数形式“come”，不能使用第三人称单数形式“comes”。