Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clear and natural: start with a direct answer, avoid invented or incorrect words (e.g. “skycraft burn”), and limit hesitations. Give one concise reason and a brief future plan using correct grammar and linking words.

Ejemplo: No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home because I live in the countryside. However, in the future I might move to a nearby city, so I would consider living in a tall apartment building.

Sugerencia: Give a direct, full sentence answer and explain with specific details. Use linking words (for example, when, because) and avoid unclear phrases. Keep it concise and relevant.

Ejemplo: Sometimes I take photos of buildings, especially when I visit a new place. For example, I often photograph historic landmarks or interesting public buildings to remember the visit.

Sugerencia: Answer directly naming the building, then give clear supporting details such as location and reasons. Use linking words (because, for example) and avoid repetition and filler sounds.

Ejemplo: Yes. I would like to visit Landmark 81, which is a famous skyscraper in Ho Chi Minh City. I want to see it because it is very tall and modern, and I have heard the observation deck has great views of the city.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct answer (yes/no), then give 2–3 clear reasons using correct vocabulary (e.g. 'skyscraper', 'high floor', 'benefits such as'). Avoid long pauses and finish your thought with specific examples.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because being on a high floor offers great views of the city. Also, tall buildings often have good facilities like a gym and security, which would make life more convenient.

× No, because I live in a countryside so I don't have any skycraft burn in my house.

✓ No, because I live in the countryside, so there are no skyscrapers near my house.

Multiple issues: article use ('a countryside' -> 'the countryside'), sentence structure and subject-verb agreement with existence ('I don't have any skyscrapers' -> 'there are no skyscrapers near my house'), and incorrect word choice ('skycraft burn' is not an English term; likely 'skyscrapers'). Use 'the countryside' for the general rural area, and use 'there are' for plural existence. Suggestion: Learn common collocations ('the countryside', 'skyscrapers') and use 'there is/there are' for stating existence.

× However in the future if I have a chance I will uh move on to a another a bit city to and I will live in that tall building.

✓ However, in the future if I have a chance, I will move to another, slightly larger city and live in a tall building.

Problems: article use ('a another' -> 'another'), word order and unnecessary fillers, incorrect phrase 'move on to' (use 'move to'), awkward adjective phrase ('a bit city' -> 'slightly larger city'), and redundancy ('I will' repeated). Suggestion: Remove fillers, use 'another' without 'a', and choose proper verbs ('move to').

× Sometime, uh, sometime when I uh, visit a new places and include the public building, I will take the photo to save the memories.

✓ Sometimes, when I visit new places including public buildings, I take photos to save the memories.

Errors: 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' (adverb of frequency), unnecessary repetition and fillers, article and plural mismatch ('a new places' -> 'new places'), incorrect verb tense for habitual action (use present simple 'I take' not 'I will take'), and awkward 'include the public building' -> 'including public buildings'. Suggestion: Use 'sometimes' for frequency, present simple for habitual actions, and correct pluralization.

× Uh, like limit time, not 81.

✓ For example, Landmark 81 is a famous example.

Original is unclear and incomplete. Likely the student tried to refer to 'Landmark 81' as an example; 'limit time' and 'not 81' are unintelligible. Suggestion: State clearly: 'For example, Landmark 81 is a famous building.' Avoid fragments.

× Well, that is landmark 81, uh, that is the tourist, uh, building in Vietnam and it is located in Ho Chi Minh City, uh, friendly, it's really luxurious and area 112 go there.

✓ Well, Landmark 81 is a tourist building in Vietnam located in Ho Chi Minh City. It's very luxurious and many people go there.

Multiple issues: capitalization and article use ('that is landmark 81' -> 'Landmark 81 is'), unnecessary commas and fillers, word choice ('tourist building' is awkward but acceptable as 'a tourist attraction'), incorrect phrase 'friendly' and 'area 112 go there' (unclear — likely meant 'many people go there'). Suggestion: Use concise sentences, remove fillers, and use correct phrases like 'many people go there' or 'it's a popular attraction'.

× Of course, uh, to be honest, I really want to see or see a whole city in the high solution situation and umm, living in a sky rapper is also have uh, many benefits like.

✓ Of course. To be honest, I really want to see the whole city from a high viewpoint, and living in a skyscraper also has many benefits, such as ...

Errors: repetition ('see or see'), awkward phrase 'high solution situation' (likely 'high position' or 'high viewpoint'), incorrect compound word 'sky rapper' -> 'skyscraper', verb form and agreement ('is also have' -> 'also has'), sentence fragment ending with 'like'. Suggestion: Use 'see the whole city from a high viewpoint', correct noun 'skyscraper', and ensure subject-verb agreement ('living ... has'). Finish the list after 'such as' or 'like' with examples.