Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 応答は直接的で内容は理解できるが、曖昧な言葉（umm、so）が多く、文法と語順がやや不自然です。話は長すぎず良いですが、話を整理して簡潔で明確な主題文と一つか二つの具体的な支持情報を加えると良いです。また、「in the countryside」「surrounded by nature」などのフレーズを流暢に使えるように練習し、接続語（for example, because）で理由をはっきり示してください。

Ejemplo: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home because I live in the countryside. My house is surrounded by trees and small houses, so the area feels quiet and green.

Sugerencia: 答えは意図が伝わるが、冗長な表現や繰り返し（"had a had a"）、不適切なフレーズ（"Buildings like natures"）が見られます。まず短く明確な主題文を述べ、その後に理由や代わりに撮るもの（e.g. landscapes）を1文で具体的に説明しましょう。つなぎ言葉（instead, because, so）を正しく使って論理を明確にしてください。

Ejemplo: Not really. I prefer photographing landscapes and nature around buildings because I find views of parks and trees more interesting than the buildings themselves.

Sugerencia: 答えは明確で意図も伝わるが、繰り返し（"I'd like I'd like"）や曖昧な言葉（umm）があるため流暢さが下がっています。具体性を増すために、なぜその場所に行きたいのかを一つか二つの理由（history, architecture, atmosphere）で示すとさらに良くなります。文を繋げる際にはbecauseやfor exampleを使ってください。

Ejemplo: I’m not interested in modern skyscrapers, but I would love to visit historical temples and shrines in Kyoto because I’m fascinated by their architecture and the cultural atmosphere they preserve.

Sugerencia: 理由がはっきりしており論旨は明確ですが、繰り返し（"It it", "I'm I'm"）や語彙の繰り返しがあり流暢さが損なわれています。理由を整理して、1～2文で簡潔に述べ、具体例（e.g. difficult to evacuate, fear of heights）を入れると良いです。connectors（because, so, therefore）を使って論理的にまとめましょう。

Ejemplo: No, I wouldn’t want to live in a tall building because earthquakes make it hard to evacuate quickly. Also, I’m afraid of heights, so I prefer a small, low house where I feel safer.

× I don't have tall buildings near my house because I'm living in the countryside so it's very umm.

✓ I don't have tall buildings near my house because I live in the countryside, so it's very quiet.

The student used the present continuous 'I'm living' to describe a permanent situation; use simple present 'I live' for habitual or permanent states. Also add a suitable adjective 'quiet' to complete the sentence. Suggestion: use simple present for facts or permanent situations and choose appropriate adjectives.

× My house is surrounded by nature and a lot of houses are a little bit smaller so.

✓ My house is surrounded by nature and many houses are a little smaller.

The phrase 'a lot of houses are a little bit smaller so' is awkward; 'a lot of' can be replaced with 'many' and 'a little bit smaller' streamlined to 'a little smaller'. Remove the trailing 'so'. Suggestion: use 'many' for countable nouns and keep comparative phrases concise.

× I'm not a big fan of buildings, so even if I had a had a chance to take a picture of buildings, I often don't do that.

✓ I'm not a big fan of buildings, so even if I had a chance to take a picture of them, I usually don't.

The duplicate 'had a had a' is a mistake; also 'even if I had a chance' is a past-subjunctive-like structure but acceptable for hypothetical; 'often don't do that' is wordy — 'usually don't' is smoother. Replace repeated noun 'buildings' with pronoun 'them'. Suggestion: avoid repetition and duplicated words, use pronouns for clarity, and choose concise adverbs like 'usually'.

× Uh, instead I always see views around the buildings. Buildings like natures.

✓ Instead, I always look at the views around buildings, such as natural scenery.

'See views around the buildings' is awkward; 'look at the views around buildings' is natural. 'Buildings like natures' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'natural scenery' or 'nature'. Suggestion: use appropriate nouns ('nature', 'scenery') and prepositions ('around buildings') and avoid pluralizing uncountable nouns incorrectly.

× I'm not interested in tall buildings in the cities, but I'm interested in historical buildings like umm temples and shrines in Kyoto.

✓ I'm not interested in tall buildings in cities, but I am interested in historical buildings, such as temples and shrines in Kyoto.

'In the cities' is acceptable but 'in cities' is more natural when speaking generally. Add a comma and use 'such as' to introduce examples. Also expand contraction for clarity. Suggestion: use 'such as' for examples and adjust article use for general statements.

× I'd like I'd like to visit there sometime.

✓ I'd like to visit there sometime.

The phrase repeats 'I'd like' twice; remove the duplicate. The contracted form 'I'd like' correctly expresses a future desire. Suggestion: avoid accidental repetition in spontaneous speech.

× I don't want to live in a tall building because I'm afraid of the disasters like earthquakes.

✓ I don't want to live in a tall building because I'm afraid of disasters like earthquakes.

The article 'the' before 'disasters' is unnecessary when speaking generally. Use 'disasters' without 'the'. Suggestion: omit 'the' for general plural nouns.

× It it would be difficult for me to run away from the building and also I'm I'm scared of height so I tend to live in the small house.

✓ It would be difficult for me to get away from a tall building, and I'm also scared of heights, so I prefer to live in a small house.

Remove duplicate 'It'. 'Run away from the building' is acceptable but 'get away from a tall building' is more natural. Duplicate 'I'm I'm' should be fixed. 'Scared of height' should be 'scared of heights' (plural). 'The small house' is wrong; use 'a small house' or 'a small home'. Suggestion: watch for duplicated words in speech, use idiomatic expressions ('scared of heights'), and correct article use for nonspecific items.